Oh my gosh, that was intense. Amazing and heartbreaking, yet I could completely connect with Mitchie. Awesome one-shot. Bravo

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omg she just killed herself? That was so totally insane don't get me wrong I love how you wrote this but killing herself over a guy? She could've just yelled at Shane and Tess anwyays it was still really good

xxPeace out

Uh... Wow. That was interesting. Good though.

So sad :( It would be awesome if you could write a chapter in Shane's POV also :)

Oh my goodness, this was so sad :( But it was a great story... :)

Poor Shane; he'll probably feel so gulty after this! Great story though.

omg.

Mitchie died.

i write depressing stuff every now and then but DAMN