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Jessi Tsuki
2003-07-08 . chapter 1
Nice
Sailor J-chan/DuoxHilde 4ever
2003-03-23 . chapter 1
Very good. I wondered why Magneto knew to stop the broadcast. Again, very good.
tenchikari
2002-09-08 . chapter 1
It was nice. I don't agree with magneto action, but they are most definity acturit.I liked it write more if you want to. I'll be looking out the second part.
Atreyu Nukus
2002-07-24 . chapter 1
Dang that is an awesome story so far!!!!!! I hope you finish it real soon!!!!!!!!
OR
2002-06-04 . chapter 1
I loved the story, and the plot was great. All is in character, and whe see that phone when Mystic wanted to tell Kurt she was his mother.
Char-chan
2002-03-04 . chapter 1
Wow! good job. keep it up!
batE
2001-12-29 . chapter 1
This was excellent. I just saw Growing Pains for the first time today, and this definitely seems within the realm of possibility. Magneto is such an a$$. Great work!
Himitsu Natsume
2001-12-25 . chapter 1
good... i uh..didnt uh see the episode that this is kinda like... yeah... but it was good...
Wildcat2
2001-12-22 . chapter 1
Excellent!!! Umm... It was plain old fashioned good!!! okay... I'll shut up now...
LotusPen
2001-12-07 . chapter 1
hey, that was good! its freaky how magneto is like that, u know? its a different perspective on the bh side, i like it. u should write some more of this maybe.
tocourtdisaster
2001-12-06 . chapter 1
pretty cool. i liked it.
Lexxy/Lexx
2001-12-06 . chapter 1
That was good and short. I always like filler stories, that fill in between or during eps. Write more stuff soon! ^_^
Kyra Belle
2001-12-06 . chapter 1
Cool story, continue please! ^_^
Sabrin
2001-12-05 . chapter 1
Me like...I'd add it to favs. but, yeah. Good writin!
archangel (not signed on)
2001-12-05 . chapter 1
that was pretty good, keep up the good world
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