A great story. Very good.

Continue the Genise Factor. Or else.

Ah, Tyrammafar is back! I'll say nothing about The Cryosyl Theory...::pouts::

But this is fabulous! I love all the Pern books and I think that you are doing an incredible job. You really start your stories off with a bang don't you?! I think that I missed something, but is Senth a bronze or brown? I kinda figured that he was a bronze.

I have always loved your writing style and your plots. You have such great twists and turns and that great southern style of story telling.

I eagerly look forward to your next chapter and thanks again for all your hard work and effort. Catch you on the flip side!

Just a nitpick, the way I understand it, all dragons would be aware of each other all the time, so the others should be aware of the young blue.

Another thing, why the variance on the remaining queen's name. According to standard she could be Nialith ... all dragons having the "th" at the end.

I understand if the "foreign" dragons don't but for the remaning ... not.