I really liked it. It's hard to give up you'r first love and move on. I'm glad it ended so god for them all.

Really strong writing. I could feel the emotions pour of the characters.
Good grammar and spelling, formatting was also good.

Good luck with the writing
Reader458

This... this is an amazing work. You know, I tabbed this story and it was there every time I opened my browser. Yes, I admit I have read it several days ago (you may even see when exactly, because I ticked the 'Favorite Story' immediately :)) but couldn't find the nerve to write a review for it.
Not because I have nothing to say about it, but because there's so much I would like to say... but everything I come up with seems so... shallow comparing to your fic.

I can't even express how much I loved this one-shot! It's so beautiful, so touching, so... bittersweet. The key word for this story (at least, for me) is 'bittersweet'. You said it's almost a happy ending (and yes, it does look so) but I was on the edge of tears. I admire you :) To write such an awesome story, to describe the feelings so clearly and so moving... Your Haruka is strong as the canon one, yet so gentle and sensitive deep inside... you made her look tenfold more attractive by adding such depth and showing the beauty of her soul.

I'm sorry, I wish I could convey how much I was impressed and shattered by this story, how much I loved it... but I just can't find the proper words *shuffles feet* That's why I hesitated to leave a review, I knew I wouldn't be able to tell you all the praises that you deserve for writing this perfect story. But please believe me that I loved it with all my heart :) And I'm so grateful to you for sharing this marvelous work!

Thank you so very much! It's really beautiful, piercing, bittersweet and touching story!
I love your style of writing!

Best wishes,
Nury

it took me a while to realize that haruka was talking about usagi! haha. good story.

wowwe did not c that comin...
i love this!

Beautiful. Haruka and Michiru are my number one fav pairing but I like Usagi and Haruka too. Nicely done.

Very very much muchos beautiful!
of course! I will be there when you update three days!

WindChaser

Aw I loved this! Hehe good to see you're still writing chica! I kinda like this as a stand alone story. its bittersweet but still effective.

Take curr!

K

Very sweet and quite surprising. Haruka in love with Usagi? Good job.