Actually, I always thought Mace would be the ideal inside man. He's so stern, no one would suspect him.

Great insight about Obi Wan and how he wants to turn him into an apprentice. Also a lot of thought into how Palpatine eventually fails.

Now does Mace get to blast him?

I kinda love evil Mace, I think. he is so egotistical in this, it's brilliant, you've got the bad-guy mindset down all right.

Oh, I like the dark style you're building up here. It's a bit hard to understand, but I guess I should read your other fic if I want the full picture.
True.

I wonder why he likes following orders. He should be giving them.

Mace calling Obi-Wan an idiot...
Obi's not the one being beat up by his Master Sidious.

Haa,haa.

Maybe he should slow down on the training.
He needs to keep his diary up to date.

Sideous never had a well thought out plan he was always to busy cackling.
Now Mace he's a thinker.

I love it when someone calls Qui-Gon a slimeball.
Macy baby you've found your true calling. You Sith you!

Hey, this looks good. He'd make a really great apprentice. Out for blood and power, especially Palpatine's.

Plus, he is an alpha male and used to being top of the heap.

Really interesting idea.