I think you are doing a great job with this story. I am glad that you actually have a plot (unlike a lot of fanfiction). Keep up the good work, I am anxiously waiting for an update.

This is very good. update soon!

awesome chapter, it will be interesting to see what Sarah will do when its all said and done.

best ch by far,,loved it..please update asap

I'm really enjoying this story so far. There are a few typos, but not too bad.

I did wonder where you were going with that particular riddle, because of all the riddles out there, the Spinx HAD to know that one, but your explanation was great.

Poor Jareth. Although, I bet he makes a lovely peach tree. Sexiest peach tree in the Underground, right?

And I'm guessing that the blonde in the throne room who threw her arms around the tree was actually his sister? Maybe? That's my guess anyway. Update soon!

Just found this story and I'm glad I did. A very good read. There are a few misplaced words and other tiny errors (apparently you had a different name for her intended than Wyatt early on?) but those are first draft type of errors and it's good to just keep writing and getting those ideas down rather than angst over them.

Of course I don't believe Jareth's really, really dead though I do wonder who his girlfriend was... not Antigone, I gather.

Good writing and I'll happily sit back and enjoy the ride.

An enjoyable chapter!

interesting chapter!! I can't wait to see what the next one holds!

An interesting chapter!

great ch..it has been awhile..please update asap

Wow it's a real cliffhanger you got there. I love the story and I hope you will post another chapter soon. Keep up the good work

This is great! I love it! :-) Please don't let Jareth be dead! :-( Keep it up! And Update! Update!

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LOL that was awesome!
I just read all of it
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I really do love it... this is the first Labyrinth story that I actually really like!
btw, I suspect that though Lutin may be the bad guy, he must be such a fun character to write with, right?? Villains are always so much fun to create! And your Lutin is fantabulous!
Me? Crazy? Why, yes, actually!! However did you guess?
But anyway, I do hope you update soon!

Tari-Nienna-Elensar

A nice beginning. I'm excited to hear what's happened in the underground since Sarah's last visit. Lutin is a fun character to read, and there's so much mystery and tension around Jareth - love it! Can't wait for more.

yes i love it please update more often.if u r able to")