Very nice story! I usually don't like this pairing, but sometimes I do, like now. I like how the kiss wasn't perfect, like kisses are in a lot of other fanfics. You made it more realistic. I also loved the ending. Great job! ^_^

Very nice description here:
The desert was melting in the sparse sunlight. It heaved in splashes of crimson over molten gold and fell away like sea during ebb tide. Silence reigned over the chaos of colour; but not the deadly, menacing sort of silence. All the battles had already been fought.

I liked this part:
“I’m sick of saying goodbye,” Naruto whispered sharply. “Sick of chasing you. Tell me to give up.”
“Give up,” Sasuke said automatically.
“I never do.” Naruto nipped at his lips. Sasuke stiffened. “I never will.”

Lol:
Sasuke gritted his teeth. Okay, if that… weird sensation was sex, he never wanted to do it again! Fingers weren’t exactly terrific, but this was so much worse. Leave it to Naruto to ruin things towards the end.

I like this... It's really good. Like I can't explain why I like it so much, but I do. I like your description methods and I like the overall idea. And mphm sasuke blindfolded and getting done by Naruto.

Love Natsuki Lee

Wow! I really like it.

Kisses from Argentina!

The story was as hot as the desert! The imagery you evoked was quite vivid and beautiful.

I enjoyed this fic. ^^ Very nice.

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WOW! SO GOOD!

you do have to stop running

oh my god! haha, wow, that was so hot and romantic at the same time! sex during a thunderstorm? *swoons* lol, i love it! the emotion and uncertainty of what might happen next; it's great! XD

Loved it!