It's a beautiful little story that makes me kind of sad, because I want more, but it's already the right length. oh well (reread)

Aw, this was a nice little one shot. I love how true to the characters this story is. I wish I could write in character like this but I just can't help but butcher them completely :P Anywayz, Rei has the magic touch! Thanks for the fic!

Nice

I like it. I really do :3

It's short, it's simple, and it captures what would most likely be the basic relationship Shinji and Rei would share at this point of their lives. Nothing too complex, and nothing too simple. It's just right |3

Well anyways, that's all from me

Cheers ^^ Ja ne

Interesting

Interesting little story, though hard to tell where it may have been going.

man , i can so see Asuka ordering people to go spy on Shinji if he spent time with someone else. I love Eva, if u got more im sure ur anime fans would love to see them.

I am happy you have finally got to write in the Eva reality and hope that we see more soon, as I myself haven't written anything Eva in 2 years.
I also would like to see some 10-20 chaptered sagas to see your take on the relationships and how I have concluded that either they all go separate ways or Shinji, Rei and Asuka somehow end up together for better or worse!

dennisud

Hmm... Well it was... sort of good... I guess. Somehow it feels like it fizzled-out. I was expecting more honestly.