Liked it alot!

I love this story..
So well-written..
every detail was well-defined..
Every statement was calculated and planned..
This is definitely one of the VERY VERY few SasuTen stories that I actually praised..
i really like it..
it's sad that it's not continued..

SasuTen? That's so smexy! Although I adore ShinoTen, I can't help but love this couple too! I really like the little scene you created here, it was pleasent to read. And I really felt like Sasuke and Tenten were kept in character. (But hey, that's just me...) :) Please, keep writing about these 2 as a couple, you do it so well.

hehe. i just adore sasuten! even if iv been reading nejiten for who knows how long :P

As much as I adore Neji/Ten ... I'd have to say that I do tend to induldge myself with the odd Sasu/Tens now and again. I don't know why but I could always see an attraction between Tenten and either of the 2 prodigal geniuses. Anyhoo, I enjoyed your fic a lot. The physical attraction between the two was toyed with very well and I enjoyed the subtle flirting (that I thought was present).

Oh man that was Good, I love the idea of Sasuke pursuing Tenten, they are such a sexually charged pair.Oh the possibilites.
Anyway that was an excellent peice of writing, thanks for fuelling my ever-growing obsession with Tenten X Sasuke.
xoxo

very good! i love your writing; sophisticated with a mild touch of humor. i loved all the little details for such a simple scene. it's great~

I liked it, though Sasuke being so mysterious in speech is kind of strange to me. Tenten, too. But I guess that's how ninja become when they get older, right?

coolio