Amazing Job! Well done!

I've just gotten into FanFiction and can say your writings have made me excited to see more of what's out there. Congrats on a great story and please, please give us more!

I love this story it is really good it took a while to read it all though but i did. I cant wait to find part 2 for this. I hope every one lived in it!! it would be sad if the dead after everthing that happend in the first story. I miss Darven though even though he was evil... really good job though

It was a fantasic story read it in 2 days but can't get to the 27th chapter can't wait for the next one

Bravo! This was a great story. I was sort of said to see it end so I am glad that you have a sequel planned. Even if you aren't going to post it until you're finished with it; which really is a smart thing to do (finish stories before you upload them I mean). Unfortunately I'm not that smart. :D
Anyway, I just wanted to say great job and congrats on finishing an awesome story!

Best wishes in your future writing endeavors (particularly the sequel),
~Amanda

So i finally got around to actually reading the epilogue.. and i have to say, you didnt disappoint :) love this story from start to finish and lovin the fact that we will be gettin a sequel! woop! i have a feeling it's gonna be plenty action packed?.. and maybe you'll be nicer to Sam?.. even tho i kinda like her gettin whumped on and still kickin ** :P

anyway, cant wait!.. hurry up!.. i'll give you cookies :P

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(chants) sequel... sequel... sequel... please? It's the least you could do after having distracted me for the better part of the day from my own story. My readers will be **. I demand a sequel.

so for such a cold harded bastard, why was he so nice to sam?

aw... not darvan... oh well

oh yeah, leave her out of the combat and she'll find a way to join in i'm sure

(Shakes head at SG-1) Always getting into trouble on top of trouble! Thogh I can't think Jack would be having romantic thoughts about his injured teammate. Suppose it would be just like a man though.

Nice twists. I liked the scene with Teal'c. "Tell no one" lol.

Malt-o-Meal?! Don't tell me you are actually eating that stuff!!

when you mentioned rapids I had a feeling you'd dump her in just before the rest of SG-1 could motivate thier butts to come to the rescue... evil lol

someone reccomended this one to me. All i can say is hot damn!