I loved "Caspian Queens" so it's only natural I love this. I really like they way you broke things up into little snippets. While I have made my peace with RD after I read a good Lucian fic I always want her to vanish into thin air *hangs head* it's sad but true.

this was a cute little story here.

Aw! This was really sweet!

I'm not totally sure what to make of the Lucy/Caspian thing, but I'm sure once I've read the book it'll become clearer, for I've heard that's where most people get their evidence.

The last one was my favorite! It was so cute, and I love Edmund's role, and the fact that Eustace was so nice! ^U^

Rock on! ^U^ *U*
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)

i added the whole song because it touches my heart! and i think it would touch other people's heart. apparently not yours! and what's wrong with sapphire eyes and a love interest for Edmund? it's always a girl for Peter and if Edmund likes her, he never gets her! I don't like you alright? I've seen you trash and discourage some other writers in reviews!

So beautiful...you do such an amazing amount with each short section. Each one is packed not just with meaning but with feeling. I love that Eustace has the last word. Though you say he's unaware that his words pierce Lucy's heart, you convey his growing connection to other people. The comparison of Caspian and Peter in the first section says so much about both of them. Lovely work!

Oh! This is beautiful. Poignant and sweet and everything that Lucy/Caspian is at its core, really. My favorite is the last section; Eustace being the bearer of such bittersweet tidings has a really realistic feel to it. Wow. Lovely work!

I absolutely ADORED this. Ugh, the end about killed me. At first I wasn't sure I would like the way it's broken up, but the idea was nicely executed! Beautiful!

Maybe u should watch wat u say on these reviews u may get reported. i thought u said writing A/N's weren't allowed so maybe u should watch wat u say and actually mean it. ALso i would appreciate it if you end sentences instead of putting ; after every other word. Do some research yr self like you said it is fan based we are not all C.S. Lewis as you seem to think you are. On my friends story u said to be more elaborate when she had multiple chapters up...well on yors it only says you hav 1 chapter and only 700ish words wwats that all about.

Check yr attitude cause it seems to me that u think a little too much!

Pure gold, absolutely :D Brief but yet so deep! I really, really enjoyed this :)

Sorry I took so long to review! You know I love your stories, Ali-chan, and that you have my entire support ^^ Please keep on the great work!

OH! How sad! Poor Edmund though, lol! It's kinda funny though. If Peter found out Edmund agreed, he'd kill him. Lol. This was really good.

asdfghjkl so lovely. i will never understand the susan/caspian direction the film went with. this is the problem with aging caspian by 10+ years. now they can't use the lucian hints that are so obvious in TVotDT, because then caspian will just look like he has a pevensie fetish. argh.

anyway. like i said, this is really lovely. love three. it's just so sad, and gives such a wonderful image of caspian.

"'You might be gone tomorrow'...meaning of his own words." just everything right there is fantastic.

the last is especially heartbreaking. and coming from eustace, it's oddly appropriate, though i really don't know why. he's just so - not clueless, not nonchalant...i can't think of the word i mean. maybe it's because the old eustace would have said it to hurt her, and the new one so clearly doesn't mean to? i don't know where i'm going with this. but i really can't say enough good things about this work. well done.

(p.s. visited your profile, realized you'd written AWW, which i liked very much, went to reread it, and was very surprised to see the (relatively) recent negative reviews, all in a huge block of not-niceness. went on to look at your website, and was flabbergasted at the one reviewer who'd responded to your PM, in particular. your handling of the situation was admirable, said reviewer's was not. anyway, the point is that you have my, and reasonable people everywhere's, support. defenders of 'fandom canon' don't seem to realize that, for being characters, the pevensies are actually very human, and are capable of making mistakes. these fandom-ers also, oddly enough, have no problem with mary-sues, nonexistent grammar, and atrocious spelling, so i really don't think they should point fingers. so - you keep doing your thing and write on, plz. gah, sorry for taking up so much space. ending unrelated blathering now.)

The structure of this is almost like poetry- a sort of prose poem, or something. I found it was very nice-looking on the page before I even started to read it, which I know sounds shallow, but it really does make a difference! Like food that looks good, as well as tastes good, you know?

And if this were food, it would taste good but in an almost maddening way, like pastry that melts in your mouth or candyfloss that's gone before you were even sure it was there. This was sweet and brief and nearly intangible, with all the almost-ness of the relationship. Somehow the melancholy might-have-been fits all too well with Narnia, with all the back and forth and never getting to stay. There are precious few stories on here that can portray a romance with any sort of credibility, but just when I'm about to give up finding any more, somebody gives me a most pleasant surprise! Very well done :)

Bother, I liked this. I try not to like Lu/Caspian too much or I'll go overboard. Lucy/Caspian is a pet of mine. It almost seemed that Lucy's kissing him was mirroring the way Su did in the PC movie, (except of course I rather like Lu doing it)...

I've always liked the idea that Caspian wanted a betrothal, you used it well.

My only real complaint about this is the almost list-like format; I see why you used it, and it's fairly effective, but if nothing else, lists aren't allowed and could cause this to be taken down. Please don't let that happen -- it's too good. If they're all a hundred words you could call it drabbles...or something. I dunno. But I did like this. Lu's remembrances of being older were well done.

Lovely but also so sad! It was really well written - six and seven were my favourites. I need some happy Lucian fic now, I'm can't keep being depressed all the time!

I loved it, well, I love any story with the ship Lucian.
But yours shows something tragic, even though its brief, its a situation many people in this world can relate to.
I don't know if that even makes sense.
But anyways, it's brilliant.