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sis 6/2/11 . chapter 3
I would just like to say this was one of the saddest things i ever read. You will go far with your writing I know it. I am bawling my eyes out.
iHasWritersBlock 12/27/10 . chapter 3
T.T

I don't know what to say..

it's so sad...

you're a REALLY good writer...
iHasWritersBlock 12/27/10 . chapter 2
Again: wow.

The last sentence was really strong, the word 'beautiful' is just... beautiful.
iHasWritersBlock 12/27/10 . chapter 1
Wow... You captured the thoughts of someone in such a situation so well..

You nearly got me crying..
kamiaka yukiko 9/4/09 . chapter 3
wow... and i thought my fic was angsy. i think i actually need a tissue
Redallover 7/26/09 . chapter 3
Damn they all die. Ouch.
Redallover 7/26/09 . chapter 1
This well written, but I'm completely confused as to why Sasuke is so depressed. What with his parents still around and all.
My Isolated Soul 7/21/09 . chapter 3
Oh My God. I love it. It's so emotional. I had my eyes welling up with tears! Good job, excellent writer. x.
Saskito 5/19/09 . chapter 3
That was so awesome! I loved everything about it! It was just so... Describing and emotional! I just loved it!
Saskito 5/19/09 . chapter 1
Omg! I loved this chapter! you make everything so imaginable! xD Great job!
Your Mom 4/16/09 . chapter 3
I liked the first chapter okay, not so much the letter chapter (I couldn't really see him saying those things as his last words, I guess), but I really liked the beginning of your third chapter. Your descriptions of his liver failure and of everyone's reactions immediately after seemed pretty real. Nice job.)
Malfoyy 4/8/09 . chapter 3
wow...this made me cry a little. it was awesome
LivingLies 3/10/09 . chapter 3
Wow...

I can't put into words the way this made me feel...

something pretty much alike happened to me a few months ago

and this story just brought it all out.

The way you describe their feelings was amazing,

makes me wonder what inspired you to write this.

Also, the way you put sasuke on his final days

was somewhat original

someone wound like to think death
can bring beauty out of people,

and the way you mentioned how sasuke was being consumed

by his illness made it too real to be fiction.

I'll stop this nonsense by saying

I really loved this story.

thank you very much for sharing it.
Ephemeral Blossoms 2/7/09 . chapter 3
You have me crying T_T. I liked your interpretation about what happens to the people involved with the person who committed suicide; the feelings of guilt, sorrow, disbelief, anger, etc...The emotions were so well played out and realistic.
OrangeLillyTemptation 2/7/09 . chapter 3
omfg!
wow!

I cried

your really good.-Gives yah oatmeal rasin cookies
I love your writing in all honesty.
And just a question...

What a writer writes about, Does it reflect them somehow?
Lemme know.
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