 sis 6/2/11 . chapter 3 I would just like to say this was one of the saddest things i ever read. You will go far with your writing I know it. I am bawling my eyes out. |
 iHasWritersBlock 12/27/10 . chapter 3T.T
I don't know what to say..
it's so sad...
you're a REALLY good writer... |
 iHasWritersBlock 12/27/10 . chapter 2Again: wow.
The last sentence was really strong, the word 'beautiful' is just... beautiful. |
 iHasWritersBlock 12/27/10 . chapter 1Wow... You captured the thoughts of someone in such a situation so well..
You nearly got me crying.. |
 kamiaka yukiko 9/4/09 . chapter 3wow... and i thought my fic was angsy. i think i actually need a tissue |
 Redallover 7/26/09 . chapter 3Damn they all die. Ouch. |
 Redallover 7/26/09 . chapter 1This well written, but I'm completely confused as to why Sasuke is so depressed. What with his parents still around and all. |
 My Isolated Soul 7/21/09 . chapter 3 Oh My God. I love it. It's so emotional. I had my eyes welling up with tears! Good job, excellent writer. x. |
 Saskito 5/19/09 . chapter 3That was so awesome! I loved everything about it! It was just so... Describing and emotional! I just loved it! |
 Saskito 5/19/09 . chapter 1Omg! I loved this chapter! you make everything so imaginable! xD Great job! |
 Your Mom 4/16/09 . chapter 3 I liked the first chapter okay, not so much the letter chapter (I couldn't really see him saying those things as his last words, I guess), but I really liked the beginning of your third chapter. Your descriptions of his liver failure and of everyone's reactions immediately after seemed pretty real. Nice job.) |
 Malfoyy 4/8/09 . chapter 3wow...this made me cry a little. it was awesome |
 LivingLies 3/10/09 . chapter 3Wow...
I can't put into words the way this made me feel...
something pretty much alike happened to me a few months ago
and this story just brought it all out.
The way you describe their feelings was amazing,
makes me wonder what inspired you to write this.
Also, the way you put sasuke on his final days
was somewhat original
someone wound like to think death
can bring beauty out of people,
and the way you mentioned how sasuke was being consumed
by his illness made it too real to be fiction.
I'll stop this nonsense by saying
I really loved this story.
thank you very much for sharing it. |
 Ephemeral Blossoms 2/7/09 . chapter 3You have me crying T_T. I liked your interpretation about what happens to the people involved with the person who committed suicide; the feelings of guilt, sorrow, disbelief, anger, etc...The emotions were so well played out and realistic. |
 OrangeLillyTemptation 2/7/09 . chapter 3omfg!
wow!
I cried
your really good.-Gives yah oatmeal rasin cookies
I love your writing in all honesty.
And just a question...
What a writer writes about, Does it reflect them somehow?
Lemme know. |