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  Guest 3/20/13 . chapter 9 YOU FUCKING PEICE OF SHIT |
 NeoJubiSannin1870 1/1/13 . chapter 9Wwwwhhhyyyyyy... We why did u abandon this piece of heaven! Please UPDATE! |
| Anonymous 11/26/12 . chapter 9 VERY great story so far, really can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you write more. (all of you other readers out there, if this writer isn't writing anymore try to get him to write more) |
| narumatsu666666 9/14/12 . chapter 9 PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY IS AWSOME |
| airwatcher 8/1/12 . chapter 5 love the story so far. but what the hell man? hado 33 white lightning? it's hado 4 white lightning or hado 33 blue fire crash down! but other than that, lovin the story |
| nicestoryyouhave 7/15/12 . chapter 9 this is great |
| Pornoy SP 5/21/12 . chapter 9 ok you seriously need to update more im hooked on this :) |
| DarkusCyril 5/15/12 . chapter 9 hey, this story is cool, you should continue it when you get some free time XD (sorry for the cheesy way of saying it, but its true :P) |
| Name 4/25/12 . chapter 1 Its really annoying when some character dies, goes to soul society and immedeatley suspects aizen, gin and tousen. I mean, on what bases? And since when does Hakuda (hand-to-hand) have anything to do with illusions? |
| mattcun 4/14/12 . chapter 9 plz write more |
| shunshinking 3/6/12 . chapter 9 I hope you get a chance to update this story i would like to see the reactions of naruto's parents and there ever be a time where they go back to the elemental nations? |
| dhh 2/14/12 . chapter 4 Ok..I quit.. I read the top part about how they're just giving Naruto a REASON to have a harem and naming a Noble Clan for him.. IT MAKES NO SENSE! IT'S UNREALISTIC AND JUST BADLY WRITTEN! How can you believe that, that will work just 'like that'? It's s utterly lame! I can't believe you'd just say what you said in that scene..Give him that and that's that..NO WAY! I quit from that scene..WOW! It's been a while for me to come across something this badly written..."shakeshead".. |
| dhh 2/13/12 . chapter 1 I don't like the fact that it's so rushed and that it's going to be a harem.. I'd rather Naruto be Female in this story..I don't think, I've come across a FEMALE NARUTO in Bleach before..? I don't think so... |
| Frostfire613 1/8/12 . chapter 9 this is good, though i didn't like that Miyako, Kaien, and Hisana came back to life...I think? |
| LoveLifeForever 10/28/11 . chapter 9 What's gonna happen to Nanao? She would make a good ninth addition. I know you said eight, but I like the parallels - 9 tails, 9 women... Also, will Naruto be meeting anyone from his universe anytime soon? |
