i thought this was a very well thought out story so far! Great job, i love how sasuke gets jealous!

So, this has both a Sasuke/Sakura pairing AND a Naruto/Harry pairing? Should be interesting for that last one, can't wait.)

OH MY GAWD OH MY GAWD OH MY FREAKING GAWD I CANT BELIVE SHES THROWING HERSELF ON CEDRIC (sorta) OH MY GAWD I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT 1

cool

im not really into HP fics, but this one's pretty good

so awesome loved it

Oh cedric movin in on Sakura! HA TAKE THAT SAS-GAY!

update soon!

wow who knew sasuke could love... A!

Very cute! Please continue!

... Could be better, I would add more filler. is this one of your first stories? (I apologize if it isn't) Umm but yeah, the story diesn't have to move from point to point in a story, makes it seem fast paced and choppy (past experience -looks back at old stories and shudders and adding a bit more to what going onna round them as well as what thier doing will help greatly, it tends to give the story more depth that way and you can sneak in little tidbits of humor or forshadowing that way too, just to keep your readers hooked and guessing. (look at what JKRowling did her series? There were like a BILLION theries on how it would end and all of them contradicting and based on what Harry hased to do and what his morals deem him to do which is a contradiction in itself
Yeah thats prettly much it so far, like I said, you don't have to put so much into one chapter, Picking one main point or scene and basing the chapter around it (leading up to, actule scene and after math).
Also don't leave readers hanging in some places, like were Malfoy stunned Sakura, you could have jumped (tactifuly) to the Ninjas and have them surprised be Malfoy and Sasukes thoughts as he sees her fall and his sudden rush of blind rage as he casts a spell on Malfoy. Thats one example.

NOw I;m not saying its bad, This is a promising story (and a I have aweak spot for SasuSaku and Naruto/ HP cross overs)