I really like the story so far but please, don't use Japanese words if you don't know how and where. Some of the transcriptions are wrong. Don't spoil such a good story with it, please.

My guess - it's Sense of security or rather lack there of :) Watari seems to be off-balance on this mission. And he has to come alone, not partnered with anyone. Unusual, ne? And the priest beats him too :) Nice part that one :)
I like your style. The story comes out neat and not dragged out like most authors have them. Looks like you have planned where it goes.
Hope to read more soon!
Oh, and you didn't say if you needed a male or a female Japanese name for a character in the next chapter.

Awesome chapter, again the moments between watari and Bon are sweet. That priest is really asking for it, seriously, oh and angry watari is amazing he can give tatsumi a run for his money. I wonder why he doesn't want tatsumi to know about his muraki updates? Okay as for the lotus petal probably most have guest it by now but i can try it right, so i'm going to go for Stability, which is being shot to hell and back, watari is loosing his stability with the priest messing with him, changing his hair being so rude and stuff trows watari off his loop, he made him angry not and easy feat in itself, and that makes watari unstable to me. so thats my shot i might not get it right, but you asked for a jap name, and my fave is Hayate Houjou. it might be help full. also nice to put the profile, now i know that i love watari and not in vain, we were borne on the same date April 18th we share the same blood type, like the same food, and my fav color is red too tho a different shade, it sounds stipid but its kind of fun. write soon

This story is really interesting...I'm really enjoying it. I look forward to reading more so...please update soon!

I like it, like watari i find that i dislike the priest, old bat talking to genky 'tari like that. I've always found the interactions between watari and 'soka to he interesting. they some how bring out the best in eachother, watari keeps hisoka calm while hisoka manages to get watari in to a sort of light seriousness and he opens up to 'soka then others, god knows why. So i love that little piece with them. I'm intrigued as to why watari's hair is turning black, oh why..T_T i love his golden locks. I like the detail about his double majored and that he died you made it for him to have died abroad its totally awesome and nee, and i agree with the watari and the hippie idea. I'm dying to know what is your take on his death and ofcurse brilliant having Muraki's influence in this, i can't wait to read more.

Ja!

I've got one word for you: Update. Yes this is such a good fanfic that I want to continue to read but can't due to lack of chapters. No rush though.

jeeh! you updated again ;D
It's getting interesting, Muraki is coming =)
I hope there's gonna be some Muraki/Watari in it, that's my faverite pairing. ;)
Update soon please! ^^

Another great chapter! I can't wait to read more of this...Keep up the good work!

i like it. watary is my fav char and i love the depth you are giving his character, and any dangerous mission is entrataining, i want to see in to what kind of trouble will he get himself, and more importantly how he'll riggle out of it. up date soon

Awesome story so far! I can't wait to read more of it! Looking forward to your next update, so please update soon!