No, Omegas are Alpha. All of them. They are outside of pack structure. Read Hunting Ground, before you spout nonsense. Anna explained it to Ric, the Italian Pack's Omega.

An Omega is an Alpha who is extremely ZEN.

re: He wondered inside

The word you want is 'wandered'.

i.e.: She stared in wonder v.s. She wandered off.

The two words don't even have the same meaning.

I hope I don't sound to harsh but there were a few things that bugged me. In the novels walker's don't have a coyote spirit as well as their own person, they are just themselves. Also Jordan's background sounded a lot like Mercy's. I'm not saying it was bad just that these are things you might want to consider in the future. Good luck, and keep writing!

Hello !

I was searching a story with Samuel as main character and i must tell that i really love your story. I like how you describe Sam ans Jordan. I love their relationship and i really wanted to be a chracter in your story.

I was just a little sad because i think their relationship was too fast but with werewolf we don't know how it will end.

Thank you for your wonderfull story. Excuse me if I made fute spelling but English is not my mother tongue. I try to get better gradually.

I liked it, it was cute

i think it would be really cool if you wrote about cara and she was a walker just like her mom

great story :)

if u decide to write abt cara i'd love to read that. The marrok's granddaughter would be interesting to say the least :)

That was so good!

Excellent story.I'm so glad to see Sam happy!

I love this story!

its got a great ending and i would realling enjoy stories with their kids with bran and charles and the rest of the gang!

its great!

so, is Cara a walker?

Your right, Sam would let his daughter get away with anything. At least until she is a teenager, and 'anything' involves boys.

please update asap im just dieing here trying out to figure out what happens next (not literally)

this is so great. i love it. mercy had her happy ending and so should sam. a walker as a mate is great. they sound perfect together. AWESOME!

Other that a few spelling/grammatical errors, the story's actually pretty good. _

I give it a 7 for now _

Wander not wonder

But yeah, I like the plot and the OC's pretty decent so far... we need a bad guy though ;P _ anywho keep up the good work _

I love the fact that you did an awesome job on this fic, and I just thought you'd like to know that the Tri-Cities area doesn't have any forest around it for several hundred miles, we live in the middle of a desert, the only reason there's anything there is because of the confluence of three rivers: the Columbia, the Yakima, and the Snake. Just thought you'd like to know.