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Dark Archer
2009-12-17 . chapter 1
oh. that was genius. You nailed every girl's( at least mine) dress up time when they were little! I loved it. Molly got so caught up in her fantasies that she forgot about reality:) This was wonderful:) I think you nailed Molly's character as well, I think she really ,sometimes, thinks about Master Harry, like he is so amazing, well anything I say would be repeating the story:) Great work!
Stutley Constable
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
It was fun to read. Since you asked to hear what your readers think of it I have only one suggestion. Personally I would have stopped at "That too." It's really the better of the two punch lines.

There are some nit-pick things here and there but over all it's a good story and it fits with the Dresdenverse. Nice job.
Cooper Sterling
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
Can't...*giggle*...Stop...*chuckles*...laughing... *bursts out into hysterical laughter*
Liisiko
2009-07-29 . chapter 1
This is somethng that I could actualy see happen to them.
Satta Kurosama
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
Ba-ha! That was cute
Stygian Styx
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
Very amusing, and kinda cute. Good job!
NekoDoodle
2009-05-16 . chapter 1
Hahahahaha! Harry IS kinda infamous for setting buildings on fire no?
Robyn
2009-04-19 . chapter 1
I love this story :) I watch it whenever I'm bored or sad and need to laugh without to much effort. Awesome fic.
Lady RavenEyes
2009-04-15 . chapter 1
You definitely succeeded with the humor. I loved it!
Sunuxal
2009-03-10 . chapter 1
Yes! You succeeded! *rofl*
kyuthe
2009-03-04 . chapter 1
You've succeeded in spades! Thank you for the laughs,

Kyuthe
Hillary
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
This was really funny. Thanks for the laughs
LadyKayoss
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
You've definitely managed to nail the humor. I was snorting and giggling throughout the entire story. Go Molly! *grins* What Dresden fan wouldn't be tempted to put on the duster and have a little fun (even if said duster would be way to big)?

And Harry's such a great teacher. She's learned magic, snark... and how to accidentally set things on fire.
Lerrinus
2009-02-15 . chapter 1
Thoroughly enjoyed that! Hints of Fantasia? Loved it, you definitely suceeded in the humour department! Nicely done! :-D
Professor Doctor
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
This made me smile.
Nicely done.

Regards,
professor doctor
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