aw, so cute! I loved it!

Ah, that's so sweet.
Wish this was a longer story~

Kawaii! I love it! Its so cute!

I love how this one is going keep up the good work ok.

Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP!

i think u should continue this

very good I love the pairing choice

Aw! so cute. I just love Hatori, he's by far my favorite character in furuba.

very long... but nice :)

oh, that´s so cute.. :3