More please...

Great chapter - this is turning into a good romantic story.

Nicely done - I like the reference to 'unwrapping' him! :-)

A nice story - I like both your main characters and the gradual connection you're building between them. 'Scythes' is an interesting choice for a Wraith name.

Look forward to the next chapter.

Great update.

Oh a cliffhanger - please update soon, to see whether he has found Evelyn or not. Great story.

Great update :) Can't wait to see what trick this commandar has up his sleeve.

Intriguing! I like your elaboration on the bond created by the Gift of Life.

lke how you explained that the bond is somwhat the cause of emotions for he wraith because i think it is a very complicated thing to explain Maybe it is like stockholm syndrome but they are sure part of their selves. so it makes it understandable? thanks for posting looking forward to reading more

Ahh a cliff hanger :) Thank you for updating and look forward to reading more. Interest and fun twist w/ her crystal reading/modifying ability :)

im on the commander side for this chapter

if evelyn wanted to stay Who are they to tell her no.

loving this story thanks for posting

Great update and chapter - and what a twist - now she will be back on Atlantis, what is she going to do?

Update soon, please.

hi!

will this story have an end? i hope every day, every month now...

will this wraith and the human manage to get together?

i wait, i wait...

i love your stories, don't stop writting!

Great chapter, thanks for updating.

at last a new chapter! i was deseperate to have this chapter...

j'adore la tournure que prennent les choses, les wraiths sont finalement des tendres...notamment todd avec ses worshippers! je ne me lasserais jamais des attentions d'un wraith envers sa femelle humaine!

go on, i love your stories ( all of them)