loved the story but maing ranma the loyhal village ** killed me tho

So Konoha has managed to partially enslave Ranma. I hope he gets back at them two-fold.

i'm of several minds about this story.
on hand hand up until ranma is forced to join konoha it's awesome.
on the other hand now that he has joined i'm not so sure if i like it. oh, i'm all ok with him being allied with konoha, but ranma isn't a ninja. he doesn't do assassination, or any of those other dishonorable things ninja do to each other. i'm sure they do some good stuff, but for the majority of it, ninja are not something to aspire to for ranma. not that ranma wouldn't kill if he really had to, or cheat, etc...but ninja stuff that'd go against most everything that he stood for.

then there's the issue of the forced pledge. for the most part i don't think he would honor such a thing given under threat of death. oh, i'm sure he'd be friendly with konoha but i'm also sure that ranma would have very serious issues with authority, especially the kind the hokage and council would have over him. also, he would never endorse being part of an organization like the ninja.
at this point, i'd say ranma would beat down the hokage and council and get out of there, wander the elemental nations, pick up and mater techniques etc. Oh sure, he might not immediately do the beat down since it's probably beyond him right now, but ranma can be cut-throat when he wants to be, just look at the manga, he'd happily do just about anything for a cure for instance, even if it meant leaving somebody to die. as for this situation, he'd learn from them and then beat them down, and things would go from there.
i just seem to have real issues with ranma being bound to a ninja village. it'd inhibit his growth as an m.a. too.


ah well, enough of me ranting on, lol.
just my opinions.

as i said, good story so far and we'll see how the rest turns out.

Love it so far.
I really hope you continue, can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm liking the story. It's descriptive, captivating, and entertaining, without being horribly offensive.

Awesome. I can't wait until the next chapter.

He changed sex as soon as his arm was in the water, but he didn't mind. Females, in general, tended to fare better in wilderness survival, anyway

Where the hell did you get this from? I just don't know where you're coming from, and how would Ranma even know if it was true of not considering him and his dad took a ten year training trip specifically so his female mother could not cuddle him. Honestly by a biological stand point it’s men who should be better at wilderness survival, what with the bone structure and all.

Looking great so far... especially given how rare Ranma-Naruto crossovers of any kind are and how over-eager most authors are to have Ranma and Naruto meet each other.

I look forward to seeing where you take this and whether you can keep up this quality level. I'm giving it a 4.5 out of 5 on my list of stuff I've read. (I use the ratings mostly for recommending stories to friends)

Interesting concept...personally, I look forward to seeing what Ranma does when he realizes the potential inherent in the differences between Ki and Chakra. So far, well written, and it would be excellent to see more chapters...

I must say that as Ranma/Naruto fics go, this is likely the best I've read so far. It is well written, though there were a few mistakes. I noticed that during the conversation between the Hokage, and Ibiki, the Hokage used 'he' in regards to Ranma, before Ibiki mentioned anything about the curse. Other than that, and a few small grammatical errors, it was very well done, and I look forward to seeing where your going with this.

PeaceOut
LycanRed

great job

Ranma and Anko are two of my favorite fanfic characters, tho I have never seen them together before. One thing about both of them, they are always fun to watch (Picture imagination).

Must say, watching Ibiki get caught unprepared and then miss the clue that Anko spotted was fun.

Wonder what their reaction will be when they find that the only thinking being he has killed was a God, or a reasonable facsimile?

Oh boy, again, what will their reaction if something triggers the Neco-Can (Cat-fist), and he starts acting like a Cat. A cat-demon was discussed in Nurato cannon. An how will the group trying to collect the contained demons react to news a possible new one.

This has been a enjoyable read. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.


May the MUSE always be with you!
~!^

I think you are doing very well, personally. I love how hard it was for the resident ANBU to take Ranma down. While I do not think a 16 year old Ranma could have handled this situation well at all, a 22-23 year old Ranma who has perfected his Art really did well. The fights were believable as was the interrogations. The bits of tongue in cheek between Ranma and Anko thus far are a nice touch. I hope you will update soon, I'll be on the look-out. And you are doing well with the 'minimal conversations' you mentioned in C.1 A/N. Keep up the good work and I'll give you a bit of critique on the next chapter to be a bit more helpful than just saying how much I'm enjoying this.

-Xilore

love the story, favorited :D

can't wait for chapter 3

This is by far your most interesting ongoing story.

I quite liked the Harry/Ranma cross, but I'm defenitely hoping you'll continue this story more than your others.