Aw... How sweet.

I like this chapter, not only because it was so sweet, but also because it just read really well (wow, talk about good grammar). The flow was there, and the chapter was a bit longer than normal. Very, very good.

Cute!!
(Don't hurt her...)

Actually, it might be fun to see a bit of Ichiruki...ne?

WOOHOO! IT'S A DATE!! XD

Aww. I think that scene would be really sweet to see. Looks like she didn't have to ask him to clarify where she stood. That makes things a whole lot easier. I sense the end coming. Are Kisuke and Yoruichi going to get closer by the end of this too? I know you have one more pair left before ending, but it's not them for obvious reasons. I can't wait to see what's next. -WV

hihi yay they Kissed! :D

Aww poor Ranran. -pushes Toshiro away- go and have fun with Momo! Leave miz Matsumoto ALONE.

I hope Ran and Gin can get together REAL soon so they can sort this mess out.

Naturally there is trouble everywhere he goes. XD Poor guy can't catch a break. That's okay though, as I'm sure everything will work out in the end. It's nice that Toshiro cares. Unfortunately, Ran doesn't see much of that. As long as things turn out it's fine I guess. Maybe Toshiro should have a talk with Gin XD -WV

"...no one business." 'no one's'

"...she was causing her trouble." 'it' maybe?

At least Hitsugaya wasn't made out to be the bad guy, but this could certainly be some interesting foreshadowing. Good job.

yay new chaps ^_^ yay *happy mode*
this is getting better and better
upload soon pls ^_^

Well done as always. I'm interested in seeing where you take it with Hitsugaya next chapter.

Oh but Gin helped with Rukia's case!! He only seems like a bad guy. -gives Toshiro a light smack-

Eh, thanks for updating. (I was actually rereading this yesterday. XD )

Oh, don't go ruining things Toshiro. Bah. They need a bit of help as it is, they don't need any dampeners. XD If that's even a word. I tend to make them up sometimes. My high school math teacher used to make up all of his tests too. I can't imagine how much work that is. Geez. Sweet chapter though. Gin is affectionate. It's about time. -WV

I don't think it counts, he has to ask her out for real. -nudges Gin and grins-

Just one small mistake that really jumped out at me, other than that though it was a very lovely chapter. I don't believe I need to comment about the length since I already did that (I think). The chapter was very sweet, and I really liked the way you described things. I can't wait for the next one!

I would totally count it as a date. I love how the scenes you make seem so real. Like I could see this happening in real life. I can't wait until we get peppermint back. M. -WV