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a passer by
2009-06-22 . chapter 28
Geez. That was too touching, and fulfilling. I do hope you can return to this and have a continuation just to make my day(s). Phenomenally finished.

--newfound fan
Alison
2009-06-18 . chapter 28
It's so hard, to say goodbye, to Unbridledmind. You got me speechless. Wish I could say more but it's your fault so blame yourself. Lol!
dretti
2009-06-16 . chapter 28
oye vey. i can't believe it's "over". i hope it's not, i really do because you have become a staple in my life lol. but aside form that, *sighs* fantastic.
BlindLoveFreeSpirit
2009-06-14 . chapter 28
You read my mind. Just the other day I was drowning my ear with "If I Could" and admiring all that it entailed for such a relationship. You are perfection my sister. Perfection. In every aspsct. And I for one can say that by following your works for so long, "I found God in myself, and I loved her fiercely."
EndlessDreamer1024
2009-06-14 . chapter 28
What can I say that I haven't said before? Regina Belle's 'If I Could'...a personal favorite of mine. Whenever I read Toussaint, I thought of actress Lorraine Toussaint from back in the day's Any Day Now and present day's Saving Grace. Jess and Colin, yeah, I feel the same way. Nicole and Antonio are do versatile...

I commend you on sending the message about HIV/AIDS. Someone close to me succumbed to AIDS-related illnesses and it makes me proud to see a writer that I respect bring up a tough subject, a subject however, that needs to be brought up.

Thank you again and I look forward to your future stories.
a passer by
2009-06-14 . chapter 27
Awesome, awesome, awesome. I'm stunned at your abilities.
Alison
2009-06-13 . chapter 27
Magnificent, yet tragic because I know it must end. Oh man, I love this, I love the journey and I dread yet appreciate the pending end.
BlindLoveFreeSpirit
2009-06-10 . chapter 27
That was a quick update. Pleasantly surprised. I can't believe this is going to end. You are so talented Unbridled.mind. A true gem in your work. Now I have to tell my friend you updated so soon!
EndlessDreamer1024
2009-06-08 . chapter 27
you know what makes a great story? the ability to see the story lines unfolding in front of your eyes. You are a great writer and this was a great story. Just thought I'd tell you that even though the story hasn't ended yet.
A
2009-06-06 . chapter 26
You don't know how bad I wanted to read this chapter when I saw it was posted, but I knew my week was going to be a long and crappy one and decided to save it until I was REALLY down in the dumps and let me say, you didn't disappoint me. Shocker. I'm bummed that it has come to an end but I know you'll leave us readers satisfied.
the passer by
2009-06-04 . chapter 26
I feel like I've just begun to hear from you, and I guess that's because I'm coming in later than the others, but I've read for understanding and I'm not ready to say goodbye to this story! Haha. You are an amazing writer and I know the next chapter will be another knockout under your belt.
Imagination-On-The-Loose
2009-06-03 . chapter 26
As always looved it! I think the speech Nicole gave at her mother's funeral and the way she handled it was perfect. I dont think anything better could have been said. I know this may seem a little bit of a "out there" question but Colin first son was sick and got better right? Isnt that where his and desiree's debt came from? Also the penultimate chapter NO WAY! WE CAN"T LET THAT HAPPEN! Just kidding cause whatever you decide im behind, you've taken us on such a wonderful jouney and I'm so glad you shared it with us.
dretti
2009-06-02 . chapter 26
Wow (wo)man, that's intense. i can tell you went to a deep place for this one. well wel worth the wait. I have no criticism.
BlindLoveFreeSpirit
2009-06-01 . chapter 26
Oh my. You came with it. My worst fear was Nina dying and somehow I just knew that it basically, had, to happen. I felt for her as a mother, a friend, a lover, from every aspect you displayed and I'm speechless in the most astounding and beautiful way. I'm caught in the superb mix of it all.
a passer by
2009-05-21 . chapter 25
Hi, I'm a friend of "BlindLoveFreeSprit", she recommended me to your story because I absolutely adored MISSING and I must say, you are spectacular. Such emotion and intensity and PURPOSE most of all. I'm in complete awe how you are so effortlessly (it seems) able to keep this show alive in my mind. Splendid and I can't wait until you add more. She better tell me when!
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