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Hoosier
2009-02-09 . chapter 1
I'm glad to see that you wrapped up the story of Karen and Frank's baby. Too rich, seeing Marty pratically hyperventilating about the impending birth!
Kasman
2009-02-07 . chapter 1
Nice work, Mom, although I can't say I was that coherent immediately after having either of mine.
ashatanii
2009-02-07 . chapter 1
Thank goodness Mom is here to keep these charcters alive and active. And now we have a cast member. Smooth Lee, Smooth.

P.S. I liked Fido better than Rover. I've known kids where the prenatal name stuck no matter what!
Beth Pryor
2009-02-07 . chapter 1
Hey, Mom,

Great job. I just got back from checking on a little tyke at the hospital, and imagine my surprise and pleasure at finding this in my inbox. Loved the parts about boiling water and not knowing anything bout birthin' babies. It was great to see how this one ended. I can't imagine how relieved Karen is, not only to give birth to that baby but also that Marty didn't have to deliver it. This kind of made my day.

Beth
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