great story!

Sad to see this end, but the journey was great! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.

Congratulations on finishing this beast of a story! It was a marvelous roller coaster of a read.

Well, well, well... and well. This has to be one of the BEST bloody stories I've ever read - forget the fact that it's fanfiction, you've woven a superb web (spiderweb?) of intrigue, deception and blowing-sh!t-up to create a story that not only keeps the reader on the edge of their seat, but has them clamouring for more. And more and more. Well done, and thank you!

It's stories such as these, and lets be fair, in fanfic their ain't a lot, that keep me enamoured with gems such as this. You've kept true to the established characters and have created ones of your own that not only gel with the Numb3rs characters, but stand out as three-dimensional, flawed, and inspired. (I LOVE YOU MICKY COX!) Ahem.

It was a roller-coaster ride from start to finish, and was enjoyed the whole damn thing! Thank you for tying up every bloody loose end there was, and giving us a kick-arse finale! You rock!

Now, a special thanks for bringing Micky back to the States, and if you don't start in the third of this series, I'm gonna have to fly over there, strap you to a chair and poke you with cattle prod to make sure you start bloody well writing the next instalment!

Kudos, Kes!

AJ

And you've done it again. Uh huh. You've given us a chapter that is a short story in and of itself. Beautifully flowing, and filled with some really, really *dark* sh!t. Awesome.

This is building up to one hell of a finale - something I'm looking forward to, but not. This is a story I could just keep reading, but a finale means a lot of 'blowing-sh!t-up', and spysh!t. Both of which you deliver brilliantly.

I guess the only solution to this problem is to write a third in the series... *grins*

Brilliant chapter of a brilliant story.

NEXT!

AJ

You need help! You are funny! Disturbed, but funny! Great twist. I love the relationship betwee Colby and Diane.

omg!! love the new chapter! can't wait for more.

Omg! u can't Leave it like that! Please update soon!

Short, sharp and... I WANT MORE!

Bloody hell, woman! You can't give us an explosive chapter like that and then just bugger off singing tra-la-la! What the hell's going on? You sit yourself back down and TYPE! Yeah, you heard me.

Awesomely good stuff. LOVED the knee-capping, and that there's more to what's going on than I initially thought... yeah, that's not surprise!

TYPE! TYPE! TYPE!

AJ

Excellent chapter. Well worth waiting for. Never apologize for getting paid to do legimate work. It't not like it's a bad thing.

aw u can't leave it there! please update soon.

Well, well, well. Well.

That was one of a chapter! I haven't read a chapter that was so well paced, and answered questions without a big expo dump at the end. Awesome, stuff! Loved the balance in the middle with Meg and Micky.

Now what's ther REAL story behind all this? Huh? I know how sneaky you are! *rubs hands together in anticipation of sh!t blowing up*

Cracker of a story, Kes. And if this is a lead up, then are we in for one hell of a finale!

Agent Spedding? Internal Affairs? *laughs* Oh, you and I WILL be talking!

Now back to the writing!

AJ

Well aren't you a sneaky one! Keeping info like that to yourself...you'd make a damn good spy... oh.

That was a seriously good chapter - answering questions, giving us other questions that mess with our heads, making everyone walk a damn knife's edge... FREAKIN' AWESOME!

You're heading into some major storyline if you're gonna want to wrap this up with everyone alive and keeping their jobs! (Mess with Micky, and see what happens).

Inside man, indeed. Now sit your arse down and *write*, dammit!

AJ

aw this is so good.. can't wait for more... please update soon.

you're a sadist ;-)