You're an excellent writer with a clear and strong voice. This story is wonderful! Maybe it has become difficult to write b/c you've already mapped out the basic outline of the story in your head and it's no longer interesting for you to continue since you already know what will happen? Or maybe you need to get to a certain point and are not sure how? Believe me I've been there! Whatever the case I hope you continue to write b/c it's one of the best Kratos and Anna stories that I've ever read.

Wow, this has been the best Kratos/Anna fic i've read by far.
Kratos has been done very well in character and I love your Anna. I'll be looking forward to an update :)

Wow, another story well done.
I read slow, more like I never get the time to read more than 5 chapters of a story xD

I understand, ya know, school, maybe work...? Lol
In response to your last reply,
really? you're new to writing ToS? =O (gasp)
Wow, it's really good though! You captured their personality pretty well in my opinion!
I can't read to more! So sad that this is the last chapter you updated... No matter how much I look for the next button, it ain't there!
Anyway, I look forward into reading more of your story, and other story as well =D

-I.F

I'm also new to fanfic as well...
Kranna is my favorite pairing, and I've been searching for a good typical Anna story!

This is amazingly written and, I look forward into reading more of this story!

=]

-Infatuated

Noishe returns! I'm really enjoying this. It's quite nice to find a good Kranna story; despite its popularity, there really aren't many well-written ones out there. Yours is definitely one of the few.

The plotline is quite original. The dialogue seems a little forced at times, though. Not bad by any means, just a tiny bit distracting from the story. Other than that, I really like it. Keep it up!

Love it, as always. You have such talent! ^^ Will the traders chase them? Hm... I wonder...

This story is really good; I haven't read many on here but I mean this is like one of the best I've ever read online, and I don't see very many errors.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter. : )

Aww, I hope your grandpa feels better though...

And I wish I had costumes. D:

Interesting chapter. Hehehe. Go, Kratos, go! Can't wait to read more!

I am sorry. I have fallen a little behind in reviewing stories.

You had to leave it as a cliffhanger didn't you? Hm...Leaves a lot for me to imagine too.

Oh well, I rather enjoyed the way you had Kratos keep Anna distracted in order to keep her going. It was amusing in its own little way.

I hope you are doing alright, losing a close friend would be awfully hard.

Great chapter.
Till next time.

^^ I'm glad to see you've updated. I truly enjoyed this chapter.

On another note, I'm quite sorry about your friend. I know a great deal about that kind of loss, and hope that you're coping with it well.

If you do get around to reading fanfics again, drop me a reveiw on The Dissenter. You've missed alot.

Once Kratos comes in and kicks butt, I'll be ready with the popcorn~

Huzzah for an Update! :D I hope the next one doesn't take as long. -winks-

As for the grammar, I didn't see any. Of course, that's also 'cause my grammatical skills are not worth much. xD!

I'm sorry to hear about your friend! I'm glad to see that you're still working on this story, and you still did a good job with this chapter. I really didn't see any errors.

This fic is good, and looks to turn out very interesting I'll keep an eye on this :)

Keep up the good work :D

Alaia Skyhawk

Gya ha ha! I love it, Tonga! As usual, excellent dialogue! I can't wait until your next update, really, I can't! Expect mine today...!

Is Kratos going to have to teach Anna self-control?

Like with "Shifting Destiny," this one is an amazingly well-written story and provides wonderful character development for both Kratos and Anna. I'm using both this and that story as inspiration for writing my first story set in this fandom -- taking on another common plot and hopefully giving it the same sort of wonderful story and character development that I've seen going on in these two stories. It's amazing how most of the pre-game Kratos/Anna stories are written far better than the alternate reality stories where Anna survives.