You are a pleasant surprise in today's writing. Original plot I may add. Using justu's for brothel employment and romanticism, you got me hooked.

Yo.

Lovely little story! I quite enjoyed this to tell the truth. The thing nearly sounded...old English. The Old Speak, if that makes any sense to you. Are you, perhaps, a Jane Austen fan? Curiosity can make a woman mad.

Some various spelling errors and grammar issues. You say that you're slow on editing...I was wondering if you had a beta? For if you don't, I'd be more than willing to provide that service. I absolutely adore the story, and I love the language usage, and I just plain love Itachi, so I figured I'd ask to see if you were in need of one.

I do hope that you update soon! Fabulous little fiction, if I haven't said that already.

Ja ne!
UK.

Oh this is wonderful! I now see where the BDSM comes from in this story...perfect! You're going into the depths of the psychology behind it; it's not that poor superficial 'kinky-sexy-with-dirty-words' bondage written over and over in fanfiction. Pure unorthodox love commitment... I wonder how Itachi will feel about it. Sure he can't be 100% ok with it...(assuming that Sasuke asks him to humiliate him). Idk, I know that this is going to be extremely interesting.

I envy your poetic writing, though it does takes me some time to absorb all the words. But the best parts, for me, are your subtle irony, and specially, random sarcastic comments that pop up occasionally and really crack me up, like this: "“He wants to fuck particular guy and we, imagine, we shall help him with such vicious, unnatural fantasies”.

And wow, Madara's family album :D

Very descriptive. Love to see how you mingle reality and illusion.

interesting. Is it SasuIta?

you know.. i really wish i could give you a more useful review but i'm not sure what to say cept that your writing is incredibly good... though the language is a bit too formal i think... haha... anyways nice job and i hope you'll continue this x)

Even though your summary wasn’t very appealing to me, I found this story quite interesting. Though the body text and the summary seemed to be written by different persons, simply because I was not expecting to read a story with such an elegant and complex writing style, so profusely ornamented with beautiful archaic words.

I like your storyline: the tragic fact that Itachi has blood cancer and few months to live, and how he was ‘miraculously’ healed by the combination of his and Sasuke’s ultimate powers. So romantic:D Oh why I wished it had happened in the manga…
And I loved the whole brothel idea.
I can’t stop finding your portrait of Itachi extremely arousing. Honestly I’m a proud fan of Itachi’s masculinity, but here he’s so delicate, so romantic, so lovely:) This is a new experience for me.
I hope you continue this. I want the 'sensual and dialogical' parts! :D

Struggle on McDuff.It sounds like it would be beautiful in Russian but worry about editing way after you actually do the writing.Interesting newish idea for sure.hardly anyone uses jutsu or even chakra, how can one avoid it really?

Fantastic. Your writing style reminds so much of the amazing writer Hermann Hesse. lol

I can't wait to see the interaction between Itachi and Sasuke in your fic, since I liked very much the deeper interpretation you gave to Itachi's character already ;)

Very beautiful and well-written. Your Itachi is so... transparent, and yet human... It makes the continuation of the story even more intriguing, since the characters are complex and deep. Please update soon!