again great chapter. Glad to see that you are sticking with the longest night.

I was like yay Johnny and Maxie
You know that I love Johnny and Georgie
together but Jomax has a very special place
in my heart since they actually have a shot at actually
happening :)

Great update
Hope u have a great Thanksgiving

Hugs
Kathy

Awesome chapter, but it feels a bit rushed. There was a lot of good dialogue, which is always gold in your stories, but descriptions/inner thoughts/detailed actions were left out. Take your time my friend, I'd rather wait for your complete and beautifully described chappies than a quicky, even if that quicky was still pretty good.

Cheers, can't wait for more!

Poor Jason, I feel like he's everybody's dog. Jace buddy you gotta start thinking and acting for yourself not for Sonny, Carly or Michael. Sheesh I've been yelling at my tv screen for years. Another good chapter, keep it up! :D

nother great update down

Carly is right, Lulu needs to choose which way she is going. I hope she chooses her family, cause Johnny just ain't worth it. I like her with Milo, he grounds her.

I Just love Jason/Carly!

another great chapter

Dayum, Carly's pretty cold when it comes to Claudia. I mean I get it she shot your kid, but that's no reason to almost become a gangster yourself. Love it keep it up.

another great chapter with plotlines so beautifully intertwined that it makes me wish you were HW at GH

Love it, please continue.

Wonderful! Ah, poor Lulu coming to that conclusion. Johnny did know what was going on and what was going down. Love the whole Carly/Jason and Lulu/Milo. My poor Spinelli, he needs someone just as sweet as he is.

I am so glad that you updated! I love this story...especially Johnny and Maxie!

OMG you are the best! I'm sitting here squeing at the awesomeness that is your Clic scene, love ya, thanks so much :D

I'm glad to see your muse back on this piece if only for a temporary bout. You know I love it lots when I read madine especialy from your hand. keep up the good work

Hi Sara
I know how you feel? I have three or four stories I want to write but when they get their happy ending I am at a loss. Georgie and Johnny seem to be the only couple I can give a happy ending to. And that story is done I just need to go over it.
I hope you find some inspiration for your story

hugs
Kathy