Hi. Good addition to the episode. I agree-there was something missing from the episode. Actually, I'm still a little confused by it. I think it might have worked better as a two-part...it was too mashed up.

Anyway, back to the fic. That's a totally believable addition. And I can see Sweets being all scared. He actually reminded me of Shaggy from 'Scooby Doo.' I love him 'refusing' to move out of Brennan's way. She'd completely kick his butt...

Good work.

LOL... Sweets is too funny...

JENNIFER

loved the story and i definitely agree that it should have been in the show.

good job :)

Haha, nice little scene. I think Sweets was actually my favourite part of this episode...

I love your approach here. You covered the serious emotions and got humor into it too. I did feel very ambivalent about the episode too. I thought his brother was emotionally flat, at least at first, there were big plot holes (they should all be fired for that breach of protocol and arrested for destruction of evidence), and I did not like introducing ghosts into canon... But it did have good moments too. Anyway, back to reviewing your piece... You kept perfect character voice and kept the scene very realistic. Great work!

I think that was so what happened. It's like wow.

I am sorry if it didn't make sence I am like really sleep deprived right now. Wow I spelt deprived right.

I think?

I agree that this epi was lacking, it was great but should have been a two hour Gravedigger special episode. You are continuing though, right?