more!

Update please?!

I really like your story. It is unique and well written. i also think you picked the perfect pace for the story not too slow and yet not too fast. Please keep writng as I would love to read the entire finished story. Thank You.

What a great story! I hope you can get another chapter up soon. Thanks!

You are absolutely perfect. Words excape me. I would imagine that a Harry, Albus pairing is extremely hard to do expessially in such a realistic manner as your own shows. I must say that I quite adore it. I am generally weary of giving more then a simple well balanced critique to anyone but, I will make an exception for you. I find that in such cases as these a well written bonding session where Harry spills not all but some of his secrets makes a wonderful story perfect. After all how can a relationship succeed if its foundation is missing a few bricks. I'm sure that you have something to this effect planned so I won't go into details but, it would be nice to see a little more jealousy and perhaps a few more missunderstandings to ... coat the silver linning if you please. Perhaps a accident where Harry unintentionally gives a few hints so that Albus figures it all out and confronts him or even an accident where Harry is injured and feels guily for not telling Albus more when he himself is taking care of his broken body and mind. Sigh... I love, love stories.


Your fellow reader,
Rhiaonna Lore

Can't wait for the next chapter. It's good. But don't you think it would be better if Albus (it's so weird calling him that) knew that Harry was from the future? There would be no lying or secrets between the two.

Just my opinion, but you ARE writing the story. And I guess I'll like it either way. So, hope to read more soon.

OMG! It's so great!

You HAVE to update or I'm going to die! It was so amazing! I loved it! I think the cute is going to kill me. ^-^

Ah... I love this fic <3 keep on going

Oh! I'm begging you! Please update this brilliant story! I haven't read something this good in ages! Brilliant job!

I'm not sure I've ever come across a Harry/Albus romance before. I have to say it really works, you've so far set it up beautifully. It's nicely paced (usually authors get impatient and make them 'fall in love' so fast, it's not in the least plausible) and the slowly emerging emotions are quite delightful. I'm definitely looking forwards to your next update, can hardly wait! So much so I'm off to search for some equally well written HP/AD - though I don't have my hopes up :(

Wow, this story is so good. There are so very few Albus/Harry fics...even fewer that aren't creepy. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hmm... To be perfectly honest, I have never really even considered the idea of a Harry/Albus pairing. In fact, I probably would have said that it should never be done but... you've changed my mind ;)

I'm not saying that it's my favourite pairing ever but I've come to accept it. This is all down to your fic which is super sweet. Yep, you've got me on the verge of converting.

I really like the idea of Harry finding a way to go back in time and for him to sort Riddle out before he becomes a problem, although I did notice in... I can't remember which chapter it is, but you said it was Riddle's 7th year when the Basilisk attack happened in his fifth year. Anyway I liked the duel between them and how he summoned the sorting hat. Very cool.

The main reason why I like this fic so much is because you've kept the characters very close to the originals. I mean, okay, Harry's going to act slightly differently to Rowling's but that's to make up for him being much older and the fact that he's gone back in time. Albus is very much like I would expect him to be, however, I must admit that I really don't like Aberforth. Nope, he's being a bit of a bastard but I agree that it's because he still cares about Albus and is trying to protect from making another mistake.

I also really like the way you write. It is very heartfelt and I feel everything the characters do, while it's still very intelligent. My heart broke when you described the roles each person had/has in Harry's life from the wolf's perspective; i.e. Moony former Alpha, Teddy his cub. And, although everyone reading knows it's going to be Harry/Albus in the end, I thought it was good to leave that part blank, because I don't think Harry is ready to acknowledge anyone, Albus or otherwise, as a mate because he is still in grieving.

Anyway, please continue because I would like to know if Harry can fully confide in Albus and whether Albus is actually going to defeat Grindlewald(SP?). It'd also be interesting to see if Aberforth is willing to forgive Albus and, if not, at least accept that Harry isn't a danger to anyone except maybe the Dark side.

Thank you for the story so far, please update! :)

I love this story! I always like when someone takes a completely crazy pairing but makes it work perfectly. I've also read a story by Toki Mirage I think which is this pairing. You should check it out.
Please keep going with this,it's very impressive.

I never thought I would like Harry/Albus slash fic. But I have to say I have really enjoyed this one. I hope you update soon as I have finish chapter 14 and am looking forward to the next chapter.

This is an interesting story. I've never read this pairing before so I'm curious to see how it plays out. I hope that he does end up telling Albus everything. Can't wait for the next update!