Wow-did NOT see that coming

been a while sincer i read this

One very creepy story,

Greatly written, and the characters were well in character.

Seeing how they slowly degenerated was kind of bizarre, but worked well for each character.

keep up the good writing,

reader101w

It was worth the wait,have added you to my authors alert list

A bit shocked it was HIM, particularly since in the actual novel, the person who turned out to be the actual murderer was the one Drakken was in the victim role of.

Gemini... yes, this was quite a surprise, yet logical; he's the one that hates Betty the most and therefore wanted to destroy her even if it killed himself.

Happy Holidays to you.

Damn! I was hoping to see that Shego be the double agent but after she hung herself up and had to rack my brain for couple of hours and now this last surprise left me and my jaws hanging down wide open. Sheer Genius! Good story and did really enjoy reading this!

Interesting little ending here.

A fly in the ointment and he had an edge in all of this. And a vendetta that may just make things difficult for his sibling.

What a twisted little journey taken here.

CB73

i still think the double agent was ether shego or draken

Oh-oh! Just like Kim, I'm mostly sorry for the fate of Shego. I'm holding my thumbs in hope that she may turn out to be the undercover agent and that she may still be alive!

Good story!

Hmm, another mystery, huh?

Now I really want to know who did it!

Great job here, and yes, Kim wasn't very heroic that night, but, in her defense, she did it in a rage fit, while Dr Director planned everything in a cold, calculating way.

Keep the good writing.

Whoa... this gets intense!

Keep the good writing.

One thing I'd like to know is what the retribution is for. In the original story, for example, the mysterious host explains what crimes are being punished.

I know "threat to the free world" is the stated reason in the prologue, but that doesn't quite fit for a several of the villains. I have a hard time seeing Adrianna Lynn as that, for one.

Yeah, up close and personal did a number on her. But the loss of something dearer to her led to this ending.

And...?

CB73