this story deserves so many more reviews! I swear, I love it. This was the first fanfic that I ever read, and actually it was one of the best. It's sooo amazing! Congratulations

Please write more! Please! Lol

I really enjoyed the story and how you tied and untied the ends. I was so heartbroken for Seth, but you fixed that. The open end was awesome as well. I believe as a reader your writing is more than novel worthy. I also like the fact that you are writing your own novel, and not using the Twilight theme and changing the names. Not that using the characters we know and love so is wrong, I just think those characters belong to Ms Meyers and she shared them with us. There are so many great books out there where I have grown to love the characters. So please keep us in your thoughts and let me know what your novel i called and what name you will be writing under, hell I'd but the book! Thanks for sharing this with us. It was awesome and so hard to stop reading even to sleep.!

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I was so hoping that Res would hold more of a chance against the warlock, I see she could have, possibly, but...and she really hasn't been on this earth long enough to make realistic decisions.

Was that Mustang a Shelby per chance? My favorite car! But that was then... Such a great chapter. So picture Alice doing just that! And Rose...LOL. Bella did wonderfully! I just loved it.

You have done some awesome homework! Great job!

I guess like I said, I always worried for Jake loving Nessie without the same reciprocation. I'm so glad you didn't do that here. So glad!

I'm lovin this! Warlock...awesome!

I had a great friend in high school. We lived too far away from each other to see each other after classes. I think of her at times and wonder what she did with her life. I was always afraid for Jake when he imprinted...what if Nessie fell in love with someone else?

I'm thinking they underestimate this Nate. Hornets nest? Worse I think. Everyone thinks that BD was anti-climatic. I think we would not have been ready nor happy if any of the Cullen's died. In all fairness we would have lost at least one. Which one would you have allowed to in the sake of a big climatic scene?

My thoughts on Jacob are similar to yours. In Eclipse I really didn't like him. He acted a like a spoiled kid. But Bella I didn't like her more. She led him on and rather than stopping it before it started she let it get that bad. By the time the Saga was ending he turned into a young man and I became very proud of him. I will miss the saga when the hype is gone, I don't think I will ever stop re-reading the books.

So far this is exactly how I pictured Nessie to be...smart, beautiful, opinionated, young (which makes you do shit you shouldn't) and clueless about the world around her. Apparently Jake is showing signs of his love for Nessie is turning into something else. WIll Nessie do the "Oh that's gross" thing?

This story was rec'd to me on a on a web site that like the rest of us is Twi-lovers. I have to admit not only is a smart and fresh line on the Cullen's, it's got me from the first chapter.

OMFG THAT WAS DUCKING AMAZING!