Ok, chapter 6 is in progress, somewhat. This was my first fic, and I still have plans for it, but it is the only one that ever really got started, and I want to keep it in context. patience is a virtue)

It looks like R and A have finally been able to quit insulting each other long enough for them to actually talk to each other. The fathers have somehow refrained from messing with things and even that obsessive pot-stirrer, Nabiki, hasn't done anything to cause more problems. Maybe a little OOC but what the heck, it's your story. This is shaping up into something interesting are you *ever* going to write any more on it or has it died on the vine?

I hate it.

It's just read and that's not interesting.

niiiice. you have a good gift for narration, but sometimes the temporal order of things was a mite confusing to me. otherwise well done and thouroughly enjoyable.

more please _

Not bad. Good story.

I love this fic. it is very well written and has a decent plot line. Please continue to write and update soon.

I've read this story on your web page. I love it! I put the link to your page on my site, cuz it's such a kawaii story!

I liked it alot, keep up the good work!