Loved it yet again! And no need to apolagize about the drama, it keeps things interesting ;)

Great! Love it and am glad to read another great chapter. I can't read what comes next, the autobots are now in the picture! YAY! You made me very happy and hope to read another chapter soon! Keep up the good work.

Love the story so far! Please update soon!

Awesome chapter yet again SP *thumbs up*.

Glad Optimus noticed Tristal's leadershipness ^ ^!

Nice description with the arrival of Optimus Prime and the clash of the two 'titans', HEE! Love that word, Titans...

Anyways, great job...now, on to the next fanfic! *Goes to read Sp's newest fanfiction story*

I think that having them meet Optimus and Megatron first is really good.

I am guessing that you are doing OC minicons for the OC kids.

I bet that they would be surprised as who they meet.

AUs do make good stories as well.

Wow, that was fast in uploading the newest chapter...

Anyways, nice ending, left my right eye twitching, but hey, that's what cliff hangers are for, right?

AND, kudos to the name Hydrogen, LOVE it. Awesome name for a Minicon :)

Still liking this version of the armada series. It's cool. Keep going girl.

C.D.

Awesome chapter SP!

Yep, no doubt Optimus and Tristal should be paired. Again, her leadership surly shows it ;)

Great Job so far SP!

I definatly a pairing with Tristal and Optimus is sure to come in the future, mainly becuase she acts pretty much like him in the leadership type traits ;)

Yep, a good story if I ever saw one.

Wow a OC Armada fic. AWSOMENESS! Keep going.

C.D.

Update Please This is very good.