 willowwood 1/20/04 . chapter 1Another cool story, really liked the way in which the alternate pov were laid out. |
 DSDragon 3/30/02 . chapter 1Alright, I usually don't review this much for one person, but you really catch Anya and Spike's personalities well. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading! |
 Bwit 1/1/02 . chapter 1another one bites the dust..uh uh..lol well actually i loved this one..especially the spike-anya interaction. they were really in character too ) |
 Bob 12/20/01 . chapter 1 Again I don't know the characters but I still got the story. I like your format here. It would be even more interesting if both his and her narrative were side by side instead of alternating, with each of their thoughts at a given time right next to each other on a two-column page.
Must admit I skimmed this story, as I'm sick and kind of tired got infections, going to ER later so I didn't catch any misspellings or misuse of words. I'll check for that again later. |
 Batgrrl 12/7/01 . chapter 1You deserve a review for this one. Cute, nice dialogue (especially Anya). Reminded me of WTWTA. I wish Anya and Spike would talk more! Luckily we have fanfic like this for that. Nice job. |
 kalima 12/7/01 . chapter 1 I liked the use of alternating POVs. Nicely done. |
 Fleisch 12/6/01 . chapter 1I'm really starting to love Anya as a character, and this captures her very well, and very wittily. Quite believable, actually. Bravo. |