I was wondering what happened to your star trek stories: Incredible Shrinking Hoshi Sato, Incredible Shrinking Beverly Crusher, ect. Thanks.

More please, other than the whole chapters out of order thing, a really good story

I'm impressed you spent all that time writing this then upload the chapters out of order and with the end of book 1 missing making the whole story worthless.

A most excellent story and hope your writer's block has gone?

Will there be future chapters in this epic?

I liked this story for the first 8-10 chapters or so... But the continual introduction of new characters got kind of old and took a way from the story for me. The plot quickly become too large in scope with too many threads for me to get really into any individual story line. Otherwise, the writing was good. :)

A very good read, pity that there's no more continuance.

Hope to see one soon.

I love this story so far.

I really enjoyed this story - I just read it in three days!

I'd be glad to beta/edit for you, if you're interested in continuing the story. It looks like a lot of formatting got lost when you posted these, and I'll be glad to help with that as well.

Hope you continue to write!

The Good- I like the blending of the two worlds, especially the politics. And your characterizations are excellent.

The bad- too much happening at once. This merging should have been the main focus, with a secondary role for Shinzon and the Vong. Even Section 31 would have still worked, what with the ploitics and all. But the Pah Wraiths, the Borg, Kamino... just too much to keep track of. I found myself skipping whole sections just to get back to the parts I really wanted to read.

That being said, I do hope you finish this story. IT's been over two years- are you planning on continuing?

This has been pretty good. Unfortunately I am in no way similar enough with either series for a lot of this to have much meaning, although my lack is far greater on the Star Wars side. Once you added in the Act II stuff before Act I ended you lost me, so I'm going to stop reading this. Still, this was probably far more interesting for someone who was far more knowledgeable then me in both series.

Interesting... the old Star Trek vs. Star Wars debate rages on, and here you merge the two together. You obviously have done your research (or maybe you're just as hopeless a sci-fi geek as I am), especially given the reference to "Spock vs. Q" in the first chapter - the asteroid headed to earth incident. I don't know if I'd have time to read the rest of the story, but if it's anything like the beginning... wow. Just wow.

I haven't written any fics for Star Wars - don't plan to at the moment - but you're free to check mine out if you like Inuyasha.

I've been waiting for an update to this fo rsometime. Please let me know what is going on and when you will be updating the fanfic. It has been great by the way.

I have to say I've been reading and enjoying your story very much. However, I got quite lost after about Act I Chapter VI, with what appeared to be a severe temporal anomaly in the story itself. At first I thought you were trying deliberately to create such an anomaly as time manipulation is such a part of the plot, however, I just noticed that there is, in fact, no chapter X, XI, or XII for Act 1 and that those chapters for Act II are in place of them, so that I apparently read a whole bunch out of order. I'm suspecting this was most likely a submission error from when you selected documents to put in the story (I've nearly grabbed the wrong documents myself a couple of times). It might hold future readers' interests more if you could re-post the chapters in the correct order; the time/space information inherent in the story needs careful following and this only makes it harder (plus makes me wonder if there were three chapters missing that I never got to read at all). Thanks!

This is my favorite line of the chapter:


Necheyev ** a venomous look across the conference table.

Other than that, you're awesome!

Ben is Jaina's and Jacen's cousin, not their nephew.