Awesome story!

Very well written. This would make a beautiful flashback on the show.

Oh dear. What a horrible time for the Winchesters! This is the first fic I've read covering this time. You did a great job of showing little Dean's desperation to hold onto what he had that night.

Nice job on John, too. Suffering so badly, but able to take care of his babies.

Good one. Very good.

GIANT AW! That was so, so damn sweet! You excel at these kind of stories, the heart wrenching ones that make me tear up with the end of the first paragraph! I thought it was brilliant, again you seem to channel Mr. Kripke! Should they ever prequel the show with I know who they will call up for story ideas. *sigh* Well done, very, very, very well done!

I love stories that take place after the fire.
Poor little Dean, it's so horrible to live through this as such a young age...

aw how sad. Don't you just want to give all of them a big hug. Good job.