 bookworm45 2009-11-27 . chapter 22That was great! Glad Stella made it and they get their honeymoon! |
 snowangel-983 2009-11-23 . chapter 22nice ending, flack and stella, nice match. really great story. can;t wait to read more of your stories. |
 afrozenheart412 2009-11-23 . chapter 22God, bureaucracy can tick me off sometimes, she was almost killed and her reward is not having a honeymoon? That makes sense. But That Mac pulled some strings and gave them the best present that celebrates their being together as man and wife was EXCELLENT! I am so freaking happy that Stella is better and happy with Don, they both deserve it after the the mess Scott made of all of their lives.
Having Sam catch the boquet was a nice touch! Now Danny catching the garter...LOL! This was a fantastic story and well worth reading. You did justice to all of the characters and ships. A marvelous job!
Best scene "This day has been a dream.”Stella said softly as she met Don’s gaze.
Don tenderly brushed a stray hair away from her face. “Its real, Mrs. Flack.”
“I love you.”Stella stated as she leaned in and kissed him.
Once they came up for air Don pulled her to him resting his chin on the top of her head.
“I love you too, Stella….now and forever." |
 snowangel-983 2009-11-21 . chapter 21Good chapter, can't wait for the end. |
 afrozenheart412 2009-11-20 . chapter 21"Mac squeezed her hand. “I’m alright, Stel….this one will just take awhile to heal. For all of us." So true, since Scott hurt a lot of people in this with his machinations. But I do hope that Mac does forgive himself for being human and wanting this person to go away, he hurt Mac's best friend. That is why he felt this one so deeply.
The part with Don was astounding...I really thought he was going to finish what Mac had started, but the images of Stella pulling him back were perfect! Is it wrong of me to have enjoyed the fact that Don punched him? ;)
I loved the part with DL, it was very sweet and comforting to see Danny happy that he had his two loves back in his arms.
SQUEE! They are getting married! I can't wait to see it all! I loved the touch with his grandmother's ring. Very traditional and it would mean that much more to Stella to start their own traditions.
I know that Mac and Stella interacted with Scott but I don't think Don and him ever met face to face or were involved with each other, other than seeing pictures of him. I hope that helps. |
 Peonywinx 2009-11-19 . chapter 21Wonderful! I love the little scene between Mac and Stella. you'd be surprised how little good friendship only scenes between Mac and Stella there are, and you did a good job. I think it's great Stella and Mac understand that there's love in their relationship, but not romantically. They don't gel together like that, in my opinion. Anyway, great job on everything, and looking forward to the epilogue! |
 afrozenheart412 2009-11-17 . chapter 20The fight between Mac and Ethan stunned me...seriously it did. I have never seen Mac come that close to losing control like that. But I can understand it, I do hope that he knows that Stella would never want him to do that on her behalf. I ADORED the memories of her helping him after Claire died, I could see it flashing through his mind while holding down Scott.
I loved Danny when he brought Mac back to reality, but he just had to push it didn't he with the 'day off!' :D
This is my favorite line of this chapter "Don stood and pulled his sister into a hug. “Always have been, Sam….always have been." She tries so hard to please him, but I am glad that he told she didn't have to do that, she always had him in her corner. It was great to see Sam again. :)
And Adam getting a commendation! I hope he also gets a fantastic ceremony and everything that goes along with it, he really deserves it. This was freaking awesome! But I can't wait to see what happens to Scott, I hope he fries. Cheers! |
 radio_flyer 2009-11-16 . chapter 20 Great story. I just got into CSI-NY recently. Watched all 5 seasons on netflix. I dig your Flack/Stella pairing. Yum. Funny thing is I kept thinking about how the lasagna was ruined. Lots of shot and to the point segments that worked perfectly. Gave just enough information to keep the story going, without getting bogged down in the drabble. |
 NCISskittlesvampy 2009-11-13 . chapter 19 Oh mah gosh! you can't leave me hanging like that...update? pwease? |
 afrozenheart412 2009-11-13 . chapter 19Okay, the beginning of this was heart stopping! Thank god that Adam is okay, and the bomb squad cops Ramirez and Paulson are freaking awesome at their jobs! Because I was shaking, my hands are shaking from the excitement and love this chapter holds. Though I do what to smack Ethan across the face for even daring to mention Stella's name. It was cool of Mac to keep up the pretense that she is still dead. :)
But I LOVE HOW STELLA IS AWAKE AND STILL WITH US! DON WAS WONDERFUL! *BIG HUGS* |
 Forensic Girl554 2009-10-30 . chapter 17OMG!
Amazing! Luv it :D
pleez ud soon. Cant wait for the next chapter
Amy |
 snowangel-983 2009-10-19 . chapter 17are you planning to update soon? i would like to know what happens? does stella make it? and what truoble is mac in now? |
 Miss Poisonous 2009-10-02 . chapter 16Wow, he's tinkering with the lights now? Talk about obsessed revenge guy! Come on Stella, wake up and show him he hasn't won! |
 afrozenheart412 2009-10-01 . chapter 17Okay, it may be short but you are doing your job in keeping me on pins and needles. But making me cry at the beginning was no fair, even though I am fairly certain you won't kill Stella (you can't break Don's heart that way), I adore the way you have him say that "her heart is the best part of her."
Now it looks like Adam and Sheldon are having fun figuring out how to escape, thanks for the cliffhanger! :) But I can't believe Mac is going to leave his cell phone in that diner, how will Danny track him now? |
 afrozenheart412 2009-09-23 . chapter 16This still makes me want to kill Ethan. God, hurting Stella, threatening Lindsay, trapping Adam and Sheldon in the lab, messing with the traffic lights, and now an gas attack. This guy really wants attention doesn't he? I hope he is prepared for what Mac is going to give him. :D A lot of undivided attention of the penal kind. I hope they have a special room in Rikers for him. I'm sorry he ticks he me off if you can't tell. :D |