well this one aint too bad other than some mistakes i think the whole idea is great! i wish it'll keep coming up soon!

AWSOME!

thank you! i didn't really knew if it got good enough but your words is so comforting! i will try to make more space on the next chapter. Your wisdom is my help!

thanks again, simone

Well, this is greatly improved! Well done! Your use of language and description has gotten far better in this short time!

Just a few little things to help you out- the word you were spelling "chock" is spelt "shock". The 's' instead 'c'. Also, when you are speaking about, for example, Sly thinking about Drew and Cole (cool names by the way) instead of writing "Sly were thinking of his kids" - you should write "Sly was thinking of his kids". Was is the past tense of is... English confuses me!

Tee hee, so great job! That was a trillion times better than the first installment!

Good work!

xx Caitlin (your Irish chica)

Hey Haley Quinn!

So, I was scanning down the list of Sly Cooper stories (I was bored of Twilight ones for today :D) and I was finished reading the latest Chapter in 'The Last True Crime' by Tex- Hiempro (its awesome you should give it a read) when I discovered your first fic on the site!

So, I just wanna repeat the suggestion that amishparadise428 gave you about spellcheck. I think OpenOffice has it too, but Microsoft Word definitly does.

This story is promising. A little more description (sometimes people just stsate what is happening not how :P) and the spelling and grammar sorted out (YAWN i'm sorry for having to say it!) and this story could be very good!

Keep working hard on it and update soon!

Peace Out.

xx Caitlin

thanks! always though it was sean but i can see it sounds kinda stupid. and i don't have that 'microsoft word' i have some strange 'openoffice' but i think its kinda hard to spell in english so thanks for the help!

Oh, the Contessa's my favourite villain, can't wait to see how this turns out. Just one thing, it's spelled 'Jean Bison'.

This shows promise, might want to check the spelling and grammer a bit though. I find it's easiest to use Microsoft Word and their

'spell check'.