awww...

Great one shot. All the whys were an excellent touch.

3 Well done. What a great inner monolouge for that moment for Shang. It was really spot on, I loved it!

Chi Fu ticks me off in a major way. So I'm glad to see that Shang felt so murderous towards him at this moment. It takes a lot to make Chi Fu shut up; Shang must have had a pretty scary look in his eyes.

As for the rest of it? Very nice.

LOVE IT. Wow! I love the reality of it! And the last line was the best :)

Good.

Baw so cute! I love Shang, he is my favorite Disney prince (or whatever they're called) and this was such a great little introspective piece. Shang is such a sweetheart underneath it all, i luv him. ;_;

*claps* Awesome! A great read.

A super cute oneshot, but kind of sad.

Very good, you show Shang's conflict superbly :)

Ahh! That was really good! Fantastic!

Great one-shot, or are you continuing?

Youve got wriing skills! :D

although this is supposed to be an angsty fic, i couldn't help giggling at the line, "Why did the single best soldier out of that bunch of idiots have to be a female?" xD

great job

Shang was so...Shang. I loved it. Whereas other people have trouble with keeping him in character, you were utterly flawless in your characterisation.

'Twas wonderful. Faveing.

I don't thing the last line was a sufficient conclusion, but I enjoyed the trip. It was very well written. Thanks.