You've grabbed my attention and now I'm interested in seeing what comes next. I've been craving a good Dally/Soda story for awhile now! Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope to see more from you in the future. [:

nice

i love how well written this is.
i really wish i could write like that.

I wish I'd gotten to this before the previous version was chopped. I had read it so long ago I didn't remember any differences between this version and that. Ah well, my own fault for being a slow-poke reviewer lol.

I like the slow build up of Soda's awareness of Dally. Interested to see where it goes.

great story! can't wait for more ;-)

You're welcome.

I liked the old version of the story but I have to admit, this one's even better. I liked that the action happens on April Fool's day - kind of a great big "the joke's on you Sodapop".

Eagerly looking forward to future chapters. =)

guess i'll have to accept the ending, now that it's posted and all. :P i understand the reasoning, though, and i didn't think of it that way before.

and tim. heehee, tim. i loved tim's graceful entrance lol so typical.

i like the voice that you give sodapop, he seems really genuine and down to earth, which i like to see. he's also one of the guys i could easily see as being gay, so i 'spose that helps, too. :P

i liked the old version, i love the new version. good job, hk.

I like it. do another chapter

hahaha, I like the giant mental Olympic ten signs and instant recruitment to the navy for Tim. Very nice. More, more!

Good job HK. The pacing on this is much better than on the original. I really like it and I'm looking foward to reading more :)