Good! Keep going!

I think you should make Gohan more powerful in later chapters. Update!

I like your story, its really great! The characters are so original and that is what its supposed to be. There powers was one of the main problems of the story, they just werent so accurate. Like for instance, "Tsunami killing Freeza" was one of the major problems that you did... I seen both of the shows and it is pretty clearly that Freeza is much stronger than Tsunami. Of course she is a goddess and I can see that she is very powerful in the Anime, but there Massive strength and there speed that it is clearly impossible for the "human eye can see", that even a goddess like Tsunami cant see, pointly clears the fact that Freeza is much stronger. Tsunami can absorb there Ki energy and make much stronger to defeat the opponent, but brute force and the immensive speed of Freeza isnt gonna help her at all! Anyway I just liked to point out the facts about this.

One question...HOW THE HELL DID FREEZA CAME BACK TO LIFE AT FULL POWER, AND HOW COULDNT GOHAN, GOTEN AND TRUNKS KILL HIM WHILE TSUNAMI COULD? Of course there characteristics were 100% original, and the story was really great.. But when you came up with the power-up.. It began to suck.. Tsunami all of a sudden becomes stronger than Gohan and the others and then killing Freeza there after just isnt right at all! The Z-warriors are more than a million times powerful than the tenchi cast! What a way to ruin the story...

Gohan and Sasami as couples would have been better. they have so much in common and the reason is because they act more maturer than any young character from both of the series! Oh well, please continue! :p

this is great

Good Story. I like how you fit all the character into the story. Update A.S.A.P.

Eviil cliffhangers...*throws cliffhanger off a cliff*... Wait, now my brain hurts. ow...ow...

Those kids are so lucky to wake up at eight thirty. I like how you started it.

Great story! Keep updateing plez? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE? OH COMMON! I'll be your best friend? Oh, no wait... Can't do that... Don't know you personaly... JUST KEEP UPDATEING!

ThunDAchIcK

Great!

Starlit *_*

This story roxs!

Starlit *_*

Clifhangers stink.-p

Starlit *_*

I am really enjoying this.

Starlit *_*

This is so good!

Starlit *_*