i loved it and you should make another chapter shikaino!

That was so touching! I totally did not expect the man to come with a proposal; I didn't even understand why Shikamaru was so eager to tell him everything about Ino to begin with. :P The story itself was very bittersweet - as you so beautifully described Ino - Shikamaru in love with her and she being a potential wife for someone else. D':

I think that the story was bittersweet. It was so cute the way Shikamaru described Ino but I'm sad that she goes off to marry the Kage.

aw! poor shika... awesome fic ='(

No! I don't want her to marry some kage in some bloody village! If I was english I'd propably make up a few really good insults for that bastard whose gonna take Ino away from Shika. But as I ain't I can't think up an insult insulting enough.

You made me cry. Good job. Or not. Whatever. I'll just go now and imagine a happy ending.

:o aw. ): *sad* It must have been real hard for Shikamaru. :\ Any ideas for a sequeal or asecond part? Like in Ino's point of view in marrying the kage? :o

Hilarious last line from Shikamaru.

Oh, how sweet. Go Shika! =D

PS. It's 'kunoichi' not kunoishi, or however you spelt it. =D

~KASI

Oh my... It made me feel so sad!! I loved it! Really, really loved it.
English isn't my native language either, but the grammar didn't bother me at all, no mistakes as far as I could tell ^^

hsahahaha!
gosh darn it!
i love shika!
good work!

wow. that story was bittersweet. lol. i don't know if you were planning to keep this a one shot. but i wouldn't mind reading a continuation to this. it seems so sad for shikamaru say she's good enough to marry another man. if you have time or ideas to .. please make a sequel to this! please!! :) lol.

nice story! keep it up!