It's after 2AM and I just finished reading this story. I couldn't go to sleep without knowing the ending!! Good ending it was too...and definitely a cliffhanger. I would so read a sequel but I would probably have to wait until it was all written. I don't think I could handle the waiting in between chapters! lol :)

Awesome job!

Keep writing!

This is a great story! Interesting, satifying and original story... strong characterizations... well-written. Thanks very much for sharing it with us!

Ooh, a sequel. Charity being the daughter of the Gray Man . . . the moment they started to interact I guessed they were related, but that didn't top the surprise at the end from being anything but perfect.

Great story!

omg that was really good and shocking i think u should do a sequal i kno i would read it ^_^

aww it's over :'( sad, but i guess no good thing can last forever. Whoa what a twist! Cherity and Grace Gray's kids? GENIUS! do i want a sequel?

YES!

Excellent story. Really well done.
Thank you so much for this - and, yes, I'd love to see a sequel!

*Lies down on floor*
Excuse me.
I'll just be a second.
...
*get up*
That didn't help. Watching the fan made me even dizzier.
BENJAMIN?!?!?
YOU...! I CAN'T...! YOU STUPID...!
[insert swear words of choice here]
WOW WOW WOW WOW. I DISLIKE THAT GUY.
He makes me shake my head in anger, which just makes me dizzier.
*shakes fist*
That was a bit better.
Grr.
Anyways.
GREAT CHAPTER!
UPDATE SOON!
~Melissa
P.S. *comes back for a minute to punch Benjamin in the face*
Right.
All that did was make my computer screen shake.
Sigh.

Well...ahem...it's needless to say that I've fallen behind with my reviewing.
I'm ashamed.
But you shouldn't be, because this was EXCELLENT, truly AMAZING.
WOW.
GOOD STUFF!
On to the next chapter!
~Melissa

ok im now very courious as to what will happen next and im surprised i thought he was a good guy dangit that makes me mad that he'd do that to his own sons *sighs trying to calm self down* please update soon ^_^

Grr... remember how i said i hate Radu? like REALLY hate him? well, i despise Ramsey even more. Benjamin really pushes my buttons!
haha Benjamin pushes buttons! ...Benjamin?...Button? Yes? No?
...
Ahem...
Well anyways, FINALLY IT'S COMING TOGETHER! I just KNEW someone was gonna be, like, spying or something! okay, so technically Benjamin wasn't really SPYING, since he was in it from teh beginning and it wasn't really...spying...well, i guess it kinda was...what would you call that anyways? double agent? but not really to the hardys. Hmm... that's gonna bug me all week now.
reading the last part of this chapter made me almost forget that it WAS a fic! it was like...and actual climactic point of an actualy book in the actual series...ACTUALLY! :p Really though, the scandalism of it all! a guy watching them from the beginning, gaining their trust and then shooting them down (almost [as in soon to be] litterally!) can't wait to finally see the end of this!

...and i meant that in the best way possible. i'm not sick of the story or anything...

I'll just...go...

oh no! not AGAIN! why can't all the stupid badguys just LEAVE THEM ALONE?!?
...
then again, the trouble they get into is why i love it so much. so yeah... BRING ON THE TROUBLE! Xp
I've decided that i really hate Radu. like, REALLY hate him.
btw, sorry it took me so long to review for this...i was on vacation for two weeks, and got back last night, and my internet was down all day until like, right now. so...
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JOE'S MY FAVOURITE!
~Flightgirl

I must apologise for being premature in my review for 'Brother dear brother'.
I'm delighted to see this story continuing - and with a nice, speedy update.
I'll be sad to see this end - it has been a wonderful journey. At least now I know I have another of your stories to look forward to!

oh god poor joe he just can't get a break from the kidnappings heh great chap can't wait to read more ^_^

Aw, poor Joe! (how many times have i said that now?) man, everything just always has to happen to him. It's cuz he's the more handsome one, isn't it? ;p Haha best line: "Frank, slightly annoyed, Gray, slightly annoyING." that had me laughing out loud :D

Another great chapter! And i really am curious to find out how Radu keeps knowing where they are and when they're there... I see Joe was wondering the same thing. Can't wait to see what happens next! (no seriously; CAN'T wait! though, if it's not before tomorrow, I might not get to it for a couple weeks. I' going on vacation to florida tomorrow, so...yeah...)

~Flightgirl

Ehh?!! Joe!! Where'd you go?!?!?!?
OMG you CANNOT believe how worried I was about Frank.
And then...he lives!
My hands were REALLY REALLY sweaty for a while.
And now...they're a little sweaty again. JOE! WHERE ARE YOU?!?!?!
Great job!
Update soon!
~Melissa