Why would Lilly want Harry to marry a virgin and be active in the Muggle world, and then set him up for polygamy? The logic eludes me why you (applaudably) insist on a virgin, which is rather tragically no big deal in the Muggle world - yet you arrange for the world wide unacceptable multi-wife scenario.

While I would have like a longer epilogue I agree with all the points you've raised about the Weasley's and Dumbledore.

Glad I read this,

Mad.

Really good!

It was nice but I can't say that i agree with the way you discredited Ginny, I hate her more than you trust me on that but if I turned my nose on every sexualy active teen... too prude for my tastes...

Good one!

this was so OoC, I couldn't enjoy it. Lily acts like a damn sociopath!

The only part I liked was the ending, but only because it made me laugh.

A great line to explain why Albus is a blood purest I am my father's son.

A good story with an ending that will ensure Harry/Luna and Hermione will be happy.

this story is not harry potter you change every body to bash ginny and ron, one grade why by 6 year they where b B students so why the attacking there grades.. ron prove more then once he would die for harry to ron the only reason herry i live, yes ron work a lot he help a lot so lay off him, and the huccus was the only reason he left so NOT HIS FAULT. and he defeated death eathers on his own, he turn in a very good wizard.

you just want to bash people and not make in charter.

amusant!

The story was completely ruined with the sudden inclusion of Luna. In fact the part at the end with Luna suddenly appearing for no reason was totally stupid. If she was going to be with Harry then there should have been some sort of interaction between them and not just have Hermione wake up to find Luna lying with them saying they should share. total stupidity if ever there was any.

Good story and worth reading. Thanks for sharing!

it's great

We need more New Trio stories like this! JKR got it so wrong with Ron & Ginny and I think she needs to reevaluate her views.

Hey it is her story but after the 5th bok it seems she was influenced by the almighty Dollar/Euro and certain book and motion picture producers who wanted more action and not enough true love!

dennisud

Good show. The anti-Dumbledore and anti-Ginny plots were a bit extreme - I'll happily accept that Ginny is only attracted to Harry for his fame, can't see him for TBWL and so forth, without needing to be told that she's sexually promiscuous and so forth - but overall I quite enjoyed the idea of Hermione discovering the truth before it was too late and offering Harry comfort.

A couple of things that I thought were particularly clever:

He also gave Harry a copy for his birthday; what kind of a man gives a book like that to someone to use on his own sister?

Great point!

I have to tell you that it was my fault Ron made the team that year; I confunded McClaggen.

I thought that admission came at a very good time; it stopped the conversation being all one-way, all Harry giving and Hermione taking (the truth).

However you seem to have forgotten that Hermione *did* admit to confunding McLaggen in HBP; I'm pretty sure she owned up to it with Harry, proceeding to say "you wouldn't have wanted him in the team anyway".

A nice story with some good anti-canon points!

Good story, but Bumbles is still getting off too easy.

He should be in hell reliving every day of everyone whose life he effected for the worst.