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Lavendel
2/19/05 . chapter 1
Hi the story is very cool ^^

But you had update this story in the german section XD
Reiji Neko Mitsukai
3/15/02 . chapter 1
*Stiffles laughter* Poor Neelix, that's gotta hurt. You've got to write more on this one! I wanna know Chakotay's last name! This defenetly should have another chapter!
Sanna
1/13/01 . chapter 1
Loved it! Write more!
Sparks
1/3/01 . chapter 1
Cool!
oraclady
8/31/00 . chapter 1
nice.
WriterJC
8/13/00 . chapter 1
Re: Wacky paragraphs in dialogue

Ack! It's fixed.

J
Kalen
8/13/00 . chapter 1
I agree with everyone else, sequel! It was amusing (I don't say that often, mind you) and I liked it very much. But you should make the conversations easier to read - you're supposed to make a new paragraph each time another person speaks.
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