Please.. Let them try again.. It hurt me also that zero had miscarriage.. Oh, i feel frust also.. Oh please, let it be a happy ending.. Please update it soon..

J'ai bien adoré ta fic
Mais a la fin Kaname dit "Je vous aime plus." Sa veut dire qu'il l'aime ou il l'aime plu ?

WHY !? NoooooooooooooOoooOoooO ... Why miscarraige !? And zero was sooo excited to see it !? Poor baby, poor kaname POOR ZERO! T.T

Oh my god. I read this at first, and I was like, yah there's going to be another baby and they might look like Zero, and then I got to the part where they saw that the baby died, and I started crying, because I'm an only child and I would have had three sisters by now, except that two of them died when they still were unborn and the other died when she was two years old from pneumonia. Her name was Kimber, and every story I write I always have the main character be a girl named Kimber.

eee...a rather short one though...and sad one as well...

i want them to try again...still hoping for a boy for them and so that Kana gets to see the delivery...pleaseeee

So sad and heartbreaking, but still very good and so beautiful. . .*sobs miserably* I hope they'll try again when they both are healed - as much as it is possible after that u_u

this good! so good that its better than my idea lol i like it but it was so sad for zero to lose their second baby...They should make another one! just saying!:D

awesome! i like how its not a fluff ending.

...ok so I guess...I should take back my previous word...ye.a...but still I like this one better for some odd reason

wow, amazing! awesome!

Awwww...Wish they could try again...Meh...I hope Zero gets over this. It's makes me sad knowing what happened... It's good either way. I like the beginning but the endings a bit too sad for me, that's all.

. oh dear gawd plz continue this! I read the 1st part 2 this as well and I instantly fell in love with your writing. Even if this is currently on hiatus, dont discontinue this. Im faving this...

Kaname and Zeros are made to be units and to have full with baby.

thus a little brother for Kiyomi?

Please try again. And hopefully this time KAname will see the delivery.

You are right about the miscarriages but still at the end of this the first thing that came out of my mouth was... I hate you but then I felt guilty about how right you are and me having no real reason to hate except you made Kaname and Zero sad even Kiyomi.

No matter what I will suck it up and continue to read these amazingly amazing stories cause I love them even if they do make me sad so...

Keep writing...

Hoping they try again.