i like it. its cute. :]

Far from bad, but some grammar should be fixed.
I.e.:
'I can hear the sound of popcorn, pop pop crackle pop, thats not whats cooking, but it sounds the same.' Should be:

I can hear the sound of popcorn; Pop. Pop. Crackle. Pop.

That's not whats cooking, but it sounds the same.

Good style. Refine it.