Loving your story so far!
And yes had to randomly review in the middle of it cause this chapter!

I doubt Jenn or Kelly would sue you...they probably have more money then both us! (Demyx Time and The Sora Show are my addictions!
Now back to reading

In heaven, Demyx knocked up Zexion (somehow
I LOVE YOU, un! Or atleast, as much as i can without actually knowing you, un, yeah. I loved this fic (even though I 3 Xemnas as well...) I really thin k you casted rthe characters remarkably well, un, and you managed to capture their attitudes and perfection as a couple skillfully throught the twisting plot and surprise connections, un. Good job, un, yush!

An I'm out. Sorry, but the whole 'brotherly love' thing freaks me out. Looks like you had a good thing here, anyway, I liked the story other than the whole incest thing. Thanks for writing it.

Z

Screw what I normally do, although I do review when something happens and I don't think I can stand to not point it out. Demyx and Zexion ARE NOT related! And the second you make them even half brothers I swear I will stop reading this. Its creepy. Really really creepy. I mean, yeah they never met and stuff, but still, Ansem could have said something, and prevented the whole 'ick' thing. Maybe its just that I have a sister and a brother and the idea of incest is just disgusting. Anyway, wouldn't Demyx have noticed if Luna was his mother? Kinda figured that would be a duh. Just sayin Z(Hey, for all the 'ick' and whatnot, you have gotten me hooked to this story. Damn you!)

Hey, normally I don't review this early in a story that is complete, I wait to review the entire things, but I wanted to make sure you knew that you switched. Last chapter you said a year, and said you had changed it from a week to a year. This chapter says a week. Other than that, it seems pretty good so far. Not the best I've read, but not the worst by a long shot, I mean, that alone is great. I judge things harshly. Sorry, but that I'm still reading it says something, so thus far, good job. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

Z

Okay, first you say a year, then you say a week... I'm confused.

crazy ending! XD

i never woulda seen it coming, tbh

but i would rly love to see a sequel, for sure, so please let me know if you start to write one!
xx

YES! u should make a sequel! and make it have longer chappies! i shall see if my friend can draw Demyx as a kitten *but first she has to get to know him... she's only on the first game in wonderland last time i asked her* lol, did u hear Demyx's "evil laugh" at hallow bastion in the second game?-hits head on table- gah! now i have to start Sora's story all over again and get the rest of the Orgy's cards! i knew i shouldn't have saved over Sora's finished story!

'In heaven, Demyx knocked up Zexion (somehow That made me major LOL at that. Nice ending and yes you should do sequel. You got me now on the Mpreg part, did I tell I'm a sucker for Mpreg fics? Anyways yes do a sequel I wanna see Demy's and Zexy's behbehs.)

*Squeals loudly* Zexy finally learned demyx' name! Aw Zexy's mama died no! I hope he sees her again. Okay another thing I'm figuring out, so Zexy's mama is Demyx' mama are the same person and she's full blood angel so does that make Zexy half angel? Anyways I can't wait what happens next :D

WTF? Why'd she let him in?

This was me reading chapter 15 *Minding her own business-Xemnas pulls out knife stabs Zexy and Dems mama-*BAM* HOLY SHIT! Didn't see that coming* LOL anyways hope she doesn't die... I won't consider this as incest as long as dems mama's soul is in Zexy's mama's body while her soul is in there as well. Wow that didn't make sense at all to me. Can't wait for next chappy.

lol, i have too many passwords to remember.

yeah, my Luna theory kinda confused me too but i was trying to say was: Luna isn't Zexion's real mother or Demyx is related to Zexion...

i have a feeling that Xemnas is obsessed with Zexion *i read too many of those stories, lol* yeah, i didn't expect Xemnas to stab Luna. i thought he was going to knock her out and kidnap Zexion *yeah, i should probably stop reading those stories... -sweatdrop
At least Vexen and Zexion are still friends! didn't expect him to have a crush on him *of course who wouldn't have a crush on our smexy member? -coughs-Axel-coughs-*

WOH! EPIC TWIST! *dramatic music
i know how u feel. i was on the 3rd floor and stopped playing it then i started playing it again. i thought it was weird that it took me 23 hours to finish Sora's story but it only took me 8 hours to finish Riku's story! and he didn't even visit all the worlds he's been to at the castle. *Riku looks freaky in Halloween Town...
yeah... i didn't expect Luna to say that to Demyx. i have a feeling that either Demyx is Zexion's half brother or brother or Luna isn't really Zexion's mom... but if he was Demyx's brother than that would defeat the whole purpose of Zemyx*rushes off to watch American Idol*

EK! SHE TOLD HIM! But wait Demyx and Zexion have the same mama then that means that'll be incest when Demyx and Zexy get together? Normally I don't like inest bt this is an exception. Can't wait for the next chapter.