this is great! fluffy and angsty with good quality. i can imagine their relationship like that if they are going to hook up. i noticed a few grammar mistakes but your style of story-telling is good somewhat covering that.

why haven't I reviewed this before? So adorable! Running in the line of the same theme with 'Yellow Wedge', you made this so fairytale-like and so sweet without sacrificing the characters, especially Dorothy. I can still see her as our own dorothy.

Cookies. How sweet!

kinda reminds me of MG. cute! this deserves mroe reviews!

How sweet! :sighs dreamily: By the way, in this sentence: "I just stared at her like stupid" - I think you meant "at her stupidly"? I love that Quatre can't tell what cookie is what and isn't afraid to tease her. Brava!