Good! But try not to make your stories in a huge clump. :) It was kinda hard to read. BUT I managed! Glad I did to, you are good at writing! :)

♥ Danni ♥

A great story. Very good.

Awesome ficcage is awesome :O Continue plox?

Also - you may want to try to space out the larger paragraphs, especially the first one. It's a bit difficult to read, being a Wall Of Text and all :P

Wow, why have I not read any of your work before? This is beautifully descriptive, full of rich imagery... *sighs at the lameness of general critique wording*. Loved the bit about the anniversary cupcake. Poor AUTO, even if he was an evil HAL ;P

Powerful, dark...I luv it.
Gawd the ending of this chapter was perfect.
Instant favorite. Keep writing about dispair and steering wheels!

Oh Auto, no! D:

Please continue! *sobs*

Oh... wow. Poor Auto...

This was wonderfully written. I'm looking forward to more.